Fate and Gravity (CW RPS)

[andrea_deer]

For the warning and info, see the master post.

Comments

[peppervl]

Erm, I think you may have copied & pasted the unedited version of this chapter on accident. There are a lot of places where words are repeated and run together and it looks like a beta marked it up and then the edits didn't get done before it was pasted.

[andrea_deer]

Well. Uh. Damn?
I had no way to check up on this fic and change it. I pasted now the version I think is the right one. ;/ Sorry for messing up.

[darthnikki]

It was good and I enjoyed it, the plot was fun and interesting, but the thing that spoilt it was (and I hate to say it) the grammar was a little of and that spoilt it a bit as sometimes I had to re-read parts to make sense of what you meant. Did you have a beta for it??

Other than that it was a really good story, the characters were fun and you really wanted them to find their soulmates, it drew you in xx well done hon xx

[andrea_deer]

I'm sorry my grammar at least partially ruined the fic for you. As a matter of fact I did have a beta, since English is not my native language and I know I need help with it :) Much more help than I thougt, though, prehaps for the next big bang I will hire two betas ;-)

Still, I'm glad you enjoyed the fic enough to leave read and comment :) Thanks for telling me what you liked! :)

[darthnikki]

Hey don't worry about it, like I said it was a good fic and to say English is not your native language you did a fantastic job, but getting two Beta's is a good idea, you could send it to one then just have the other one double check it over.

It was a great fic and very different to anything I read before which is what intrigued me in the first place xxx

[andrea_deer]

Yeah, thanks for reading anyway ;-) I had no way to check up on this fic and change it. I pasted now the version I think is the right one. ;/ Sorry for messing up.