Oh gosh, I don't usually leave a comment this early, but I had to say, after reading this the problem with not believing in fate is that someone else always does and drags you to the fated path of their own life. So basically it doesn’t matter if you believe in fate; it’s going to hunt you down any way. The bitch. I'm completely hooked. So wonderfully funny!
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and I noticed something that much have slipped your beta reader's mind too:
“Silly boy, I don’t loose things,” it's lose, not loose
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