Gravitation drabble

Dec 07, 2009 20:08

Promised for You
Series: Gravitation (anime-centric)
Summary: Prompt by kyohana: “There was a time when I honestly believed he’d never be mine.” Perspective: Shuichi.
Warnings: Timeline deviates from somewhere in the first year post original series.
Author Notes: More silliness. I’m sorry if this seems senseless, it’s hard to write what’s ( Read more... )

series_gravitation, drabble, fan fic

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_profiterole_ December 7 2009, 22:26:06 UTC
Angsty! I expected it to be all fluffy. But yeah, they got together and that's great! <3

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andra_sashner December 8 2009, 00:39:25 UTC
Hm. I'm not sure I expressed Eiri enough through Shu's eyes, though. Might edit this at some point.

...after I write Stephen/Nicholas, ne?

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kyohana December 7 2009, 23:37:04 UTC
It was PERFECT.... everything I wanted and then some!! You capter these two so wonderfully! Thank you so much!

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andra_sashner December 8 2009, 00:38:38 UTC
Oh good! *sigh* I wanted, a while back, to write a drabble about that --about how Shuichi lost sight of his love for Eiri, the whole losing his voice thing and chibi!Sakuma putting things right for him. I just could never get all the elements together in my heart and head.

This came out smoothly enough but it does not, I have to admit, have all the pieces I wanted to incorporate. I'm just glad I could write some of what I like to think happened. And yet, I'm not so sure I managed to imply what Eiri is thinking through here, how he feels...!

Glad you enjoyed it!

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