Comments | andersenmom: More Time

andersenmom

More Time

Jun 05, 2008 14:06

The end. And really, it is the end. All wrapped up and tied in a bow.

Parts: One, Two, Three, Four

( Learn from everything, his mother had said, but take the time to mourn what you've lost, too. )

fic: more time, fandom: super junior, series: one hour

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andersenmom June 6 2008, 03:26:52 UTC

Thank you.

So far... not much. It's frustrating, but I'm working on... things.

You are welcome to have him for yourself. He's a sweetheart. You, uh, might have to fight Yesung for him, though.

I'm really glad you liked it.

dream4fatgirl June 6 2008, 08:59:33 UTC

my god.. *wiping a tear* for a moment there i really thought that hangkyung left. was cursing at him actually. I apologized.
I love you so much!I'm sad that its over.

andersenmom June 6 2008, 16:59:38 UTC

Frankly, I'm glad you had that reaction. it's the one I wanted. So... yay! It worked!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Working on more, no worries.

mikudaisuki June 9 2008, 05:14:18 UTC

I'm glad that you didn't make Hannie into a bastard and hurt Yesung.It hurts to see a vulnerable Yesung.

andersenmom June 9 2008, 14:42:59 UTC

It was never going to happen - I had this scene in mind from the beginning. It just took so long to GET to it!

It does. Thanks for reading!

reader_a June 13 2008, 06:08:31 UTC

how come I missed this one?! *stunned*
I love this, the both of them are good for each other.
Yesung... poor guy waking up all alone- then the scene when Hangeng hugs him and whispered in his ear...
I loved that!

andersenmom June 13 2008, 17:41:18 UTC

Thanks!

Would you believe I had this scene in mind from the beginning! It just took so long to GET to, it was driving me nuts!

I'm glad you liked it.

reader_a June 13 2008, 17:58:41 UTC

It was really sweet.
I guess that was what you wanted us to see - and you had to set the pace really good. it was great paced, not rushed. though I would have loved to seen more about the club scene with Heechul and Kibum. ^^

andersenmom June 13 2008, 18:52:38 UTC

I wrote as much of that as I could. I really had no ideas - besides, I wanted to get to this final part!

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shinelikethesky June 13 2008, 20:35:00 UTC

Ohh at first I was sad that Hankyung left, but then it turned out he didn't! :) Props to Hankyung for not leaving (vulnerable) Yesung. I would have hated for Yesung to do his whole cycle over again.

<3 Seriously, you did an awesome job!!

andersenmom June 13 2008, 20:38:43 UTC

Thank you! I appreciate that.