More Time

Jun 04, 2008 13:46

Part four. In which Yesung makes a decision he'd been working on since the first date.

This was... one of the more interesting parts (in that I had one character I wanted to throw in there, but wasn't sure who the other one would be - thanks skyangel2009 for the help), and was harder to write than I thought ( Read more... )

fic: more time, fandom: super junior, series: one hour

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andersenmom June 5 2008, 02:42:37 UTC
*laughs*

Yes, that would be it. I just thought it fit so well.

And I couldn't resist. Because Heechul is like Atobe and insists on being included.

I hope the last part doesn't disappoint.

Thanks for reading!

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dream4fatgirl June 5 2008, 13:27:30 UTC
GAWD! EVERYTIME I READ THE NEXT ONE. i DROOL MORE!
*slurp,SLURP*

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andersenmom June 5 2008, 18:06:41 UTC
They are rather drool-worthy, aren't they?

Thanks for reading!

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mikudaisuki June 9 2008, 05:02:46 UTC
OMG! This is one sexy read!

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andersenmom June 9 2008, 14:40:58 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

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reader_a June 12 2008, 20:01:21 UTC
Omg! I'm stunned... you write Yesung so very well!
and Hangeng! *huggles him* he's so adorable. ^^

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andersenmom June 12 2008, 20:38:18 UTC
*blush* Thanks!

He is cute, isn't he?

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shinelikethesky June 12 2008, 22:57:10 UTC
"Yesung gave as good as he got, small hands on Hankyung’s chest..."

His small hands are too cute. >w<

Good job! I'm loving ze progress~
:D

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andersenmom June 12 2008, 23:20:03 UTC
Thanks!

I like his hands. They're just... too fun.

Thanks for reading!

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