Fic: Try, Try Again

Jul 23, 2011 14:16

Title: Try, Try Again
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Charles/Erik, with brief appearances by everyone else you might expect.
Spoilers/Warnings: For the entire movie, yes.
Summary: Except that this has happened before, he thinks with a start, and something in his throat closes up as he revolves on the spot, already knowing what he's going to see. ( Read more... )

fic: erik&charles, fic: x-men, fic

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tuckatangent July 24 2011, 01:11:57 UTC
Yay! I'm so happy to see this off the meme and with its own home that I can reread whenever I like. :)

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whitepawn_alice July 24 2011, 01:29:18 UTC
This is one of my favourite fics from the meme so far, so I'm glad to see it reposted. :D Every time I read this, I get sucked into it and I feel so bad for Erik. Day 14 is the day I like the best (save for the happy ending, of course), because it's so sad.

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avictoriangirl July 24 2011, 01:47:50 UTC
So much love for this. ♥

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aisle_one July 24 2011, 02:43:45 UTC
Ohhhh, this is brilliant, brilliant! I utterly adore this.

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ebonlock July 24 2011, 04:24:39 UTC
I loved the Ground Hog Day concept and each replay where Erik makes the same basic mistake with minor tweaks unable to comprehend the basic failing that causes each tragic outcome. I loved the day where he begs Charles not to make the same argument, to stop him, to make him stop. But I couldn't see how you were going to end this, or I should say, how he was going to realize that there was another way. Letting him begin to see Moira as someone he can both respect and understand, as a person with the same kinds of strengths and failings he's prey to. She's a person, not "the enemy". And then his moment of empathy where he finally understands what Charles has been trying to say...well if you heard a high-pitched squeak a few minutes ago that was me seeing that you were going to pull not only a believable ending but a happy one too.

Thank you, this was an ending I really needed :)

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