Drabble post

[and_affection]

Two Nick/Sara drabbles, because I've had no inspiration at all lately. One angsty, one... less angsty. Both G-rated, word count is exactly 100 each.

Comments

[heartagram_lala]

awwwww, the first one is angsty and i love it, and the second one is so cute!!! lol.

[and_affection]

Thank you! :)

[dazedizzy]

there's so much pain and stubborness in the first one that it actually hurts to read it. packs a punch in such few words. The second one is like a perfect mix of every genre, I think. there's a bit of fluff and angst at the end, and the language you've used also hints at a bit of humor. I really love it! thank you for sharing.

[and_affection]

Drabbles are a new thing for me, and the 100-word limit is tougher than I expected! It's a relief to know you still got the feeling I was going for after I shaved off the extra bits, so thank you!

[anonymous]

I love the atmosphere of the first one. Somehow, in just a hundred words, you've evoked such a strong sense of tension and uncertainty - Nick doesn't know how to say anything, and Sara just won't say anything, and there's no resolution.

I don't know if the second one is any less angsty - just more ambiguous. I get the same sense of unresolved problems that I do from the first.

[and_affection]

The second one is getting a range of reaction, from cute and fluffy to your take on it - maybe a longer piece would have been more definite. I don't know that drabbles are my favourite format, but I'm glad you liked these two, and thanks so much for stopping by to tell me so!