An X2 fic? OH MY GOD!

[anchors_ashore]

Fic: The Halo and the Noose
Author: the_smooth_one
Rating: PG-13.
Warnings: Post X2. Slight bit of boy on boy, slight bit of violence.
Feedback: Always appreciated.
Pairing: Bobby/John
Summary: Bobby used to think John was perfect. John proves otherwise.
Notes: Inspired by The Noose by A Perfect Circle.

Cross-posted in here, x_slash, and dry_ice

Comments

[nakki]

OMG.... That's gorgeous. So angsty and horribly beautiful! Such a naive Bobby.

One thing I noticed, "John Allerdyce could no wrong in Bobby Drake's eyes" You are missing a word in there. I belive it's "do" ^__^

[anchors_ashore]

Thank you!

And thanks for pointing out the missing word...I'm always forgetting SOMETHING.

[visbot]

gah.

wow.

that was ... wow. that was so beautifully heart wrenching... that was amazing, the repitions, the flow, the brutality of it...

it was simply amazing.

wow.

[anchors_ashore]

Thank you, sweetie.

[thesleepingkat]

Nice. That was very well done, and I'm in love with the lyric you used. This was an awesome Johnny/Bobby fic and despite the fact that, yeah, no happy ending kind of deal, it still left me feeling good. I love your portrayal of both the characters. Hope to see you write more soon. : )

[anchors_ashore]

Thank you! If you like the lyric, you should really check out the song. A Perfect Circle have really outdone themselves with this album.

I'm hoping I'll be able to write more...I slowed down for a while, but hopefully I'm over this writer's block for GOOD this time.

[kuriadalmatia]

True and painful adult love. Thanks so much for sharing because this is wonderful. Hate to say "Been there" but I have. The noose hurts much worse when you believe in the purity of the halo.

[anchors_ashore]

Unfortunately, you are too right. I've been there myself.

But I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

[omichan]

guh.

buh.

i...

I have no words. Good stuff. Poor Bobby...

I.. yeah. No words right now.

[anchors_ashore]

I assume this is a good thing? *laughs*

I feel sorry for Bobby; he's constantly angsting in every fic I write. *sighs* But he's so pretty when he cries.

[omichan]

Oh yes. It's definitely a good thing. Angsty!Bobby is good!Bobby. I need some bobby icons to counter all of my St. John ones... Maybe after I haven't had an insanely long and tiring day. ^_^;;