LotR fic: Purgatorium

[ancalime8301]

Not so sure about this one, but I'm running up against the deadline for hc_bingo so here it is.

Title: Purgatorium
Universe: LotR books
Rating: G
Wordcount: 551
Characters: Frodo
Summary: With every step closer to his destination, another piece of him fell away and joined the trail of blood and sweat in the dust of Mordor.
A/N: Fills my hc_bingo square "purgatory

Comments

[shirebound]

This is beautifully-written, aching and poignant. You bring us into Frodo's mind, heart, and spirit.

[addie71]

Poor Frodo. *weeps*

[claudia603]

oh that was truly beautiful and a wonderful way to express the horror that he endured!

[baranduin]

Gorgeous fic! "When they had been returned to green lands ..." is so evocative. I think it's because you wrote "had been returned" rather than just "returned", with all that phrasing suggests about the eucatastrophe and grace.