Well DUH- By The Light of the Moon which I will always know by the title, Love, Honour and Regurgitate. Ed and Glendon 4EVAH. I loved it because of the humor and the sex and it is so difficult to get that right balance, which you did
I have such a problem writing sex, it took me forever to get the screwin' right with that one. Not least because they're undercover on a mission (er, they snuck off and DECIDED that it'd be better to go undercover and leave everyone wondering where they are) and while normal sex is tricky enough, "there's someone in the next room who would stab us if they knew we were here, plus I must have you" is even more complicated to write.
Awesome. You know, damn it, my link broke and my directory is now too full of tentacle fic. Could you just cut and paste that paragraph. You KNOW the one. The one where you PM'd with the "OMFG!! I don't believe I WROTE that?!!" And I said, "But, you misspelled tongue?"
OH MY. Yes, HAWT this is. And I want MOAR of course, but Glendon, oh my dear, darling Glendon. Helpful trees and the Calormene books which contain the erotic poetry and helpful positions. I think Ed and Glendon could write their OWN chapter with helpful trees.
And you spelled tongue correctly and OHHHHHH
LOVED THIS SO MUCH. yes, she wears your symbol, but Ed, you are toast. Or, maybe more like a marshmallow speared on stick.
This WAS SO WONDERFUL. You must write more. Now. Well, after a BtB updated.
Remember I had that whole allusion to academic dueling that I had to cut because I couldn't think of a place for it to fit? I loved the idea, still do, but the passage was a clunker. Made of pure lead. It's just head-canon that my Galmans engage in some quasi-medieval form of mensur
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You must begin updating BtB again. You must. I cannot wait for the shipbuilding and the journey to Galma and more with Ordilan. You must begin again. It is so wonderful to see these things from you!
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I have such a problem writing sex, it took me forever to get the screwin' right with that one. Not least because they're undercover on a mission (er, they snuck off and DECIDED that it'd be better to go undercover and leave everyone wondering where they are) and while normal sex is tricky enough, "there's someone in the next room who would stab us if they knew we were here, plus I must have you" is even more complicated to write.
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(I'll be sure to spell tongue incorrectly.)
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And you spelled tongue correctly and OHHHHHH
LOVED THIS SO MUCH. yes, she wears your symbol, but Ed, you are toast. Or, maybe more like a marshmallow speared on stick.
This WAS SO WONDERFUL. You must write more. Now. Well, after a BtB updated.
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My love of outsider POV being what it is, I adored "Salt of the Earth" and getting to know the Galmans better!
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You must begin updating BtB again. You must. I cannot wait for the shipbuilding and the journey to Galma and more with Ordilan. You must begin again. It is so wonderful to see these things from you!
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