Fic: 221B - Good things come to those who wait

Mar 14, 2013 19:16



Title: Good things come to those who wait
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 261.

Day 261 - Sherlock rarely is causelessly motionless. )

pre-slash (sorry), 221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, longing, character insight, prompt-fill, love, one bed, 365 days challenge, unresolved sexual tension, sherlock/john

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tracionn March 14 2013, 18:44:01 UTC
Oh god, this is so beautiful it hurts. My inside just swelled so, so much too and again I'm in awe of how you can create such a captivating atmosphere with so few lines. My feels, my feels.

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mycitruspocket March 14 2013, 19:30:15 UTC
Well, I'm glad that I didn't implode whilst reading this precious piece of art, would have been a mess, really...

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chocolamousse March 14 2013, 19:39:01 UTC
Sherlock watching John who's asleep, his urge to touch him, the way he takes John's pulse and feels like resting his lips here, the UST... I think you summarised most of my fics in 221 words. :D Gaah, I love it! It's beautiful and I feel like hugging your poor Sherlock fiercely but I'm afraid he wouldn't like that so I'll abstain. I like the title very much: there's hope on the horizon! And I have an urge to read your As Long as Necessary and And the lilies so fair again. :-)

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ascendant_angel March 14 2013, 20:14:12 UTC
I know I'm a bad girl I ready every story and hardly ever comment, but this was so beautiful I had to say a few words. You managed to convey such a beautiful scene so fully in just a bare minimum of words. Love it.

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treelight March 14 2013, 21:15:44 UTC
Oh my, this is definitely a new favourite of mine! How heart-warmingly sweet *sigh*
And isn't it cute that Sherlock moved after all here, too? :)
Wouldn't it be nice if John woke up now (or exchanged places with me)?

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