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anarion

Fic: 221B - Show your hand

Dec 30, 2012 18:18

Title: Show your hand
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

( Day 209 - Something had been different in the way Sherlock had touched him. )

hurt, this is kinda dark, 221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, prompt-fill, love, one bed, sorry no porn, 365 days challenge, rough!sex, sherlock/john

Comments 16

tamzette December 30 2012, 18:28:27 UTC

Awwwwww... poor John!!!

Btw, I don't know if this is feasible, but it would be kinda cool to know each day what number 221b you're on out of the 365...

anarion December 30 2012, 20:07:34 UTC

but it would be kinda cool to know each day what number 221b you're on out of the 365...
This is day 209. :)
Where would be a good place to put this information? Any suggestions?

tamzette December 30 2012, 20:20:07 UTC

Maybe at the end of the "Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick." So you'd just add "Day 209" at the end of it.

chocolamousse December 30 2012, 19:14:02 UTC

You're back! :-) I hope you're fine and rested and ready for new 221B adventures!

*reads the fic*
*gulps*
So, er... Did you spend a merry Christmas? What's the weather like at your place?
*wibbles*
WHY? WHY DO YOU DO THAT? IT'S YOUR FIRST 221B IN SIX DAYS AND YOU WRITE ANGST AND THERE'S JOHN KNEELING NEXT TO THE BED, HOLDING SHERLOCK’S HAND AND CRYING SILENTLY!!! And your writing is rather sober in this fic, which makes it even more powerful. But, on the sunny side, I learnt the word onychostroma so it's fine. :D

I think it's "He thought back to about last night." :-)

arianedevere December 31 2012, 00:41:00 UTC

Sorry, Chocola, but it is "to last night" in this context.

chocolamousse December 31 2012, 00:52:58 UTC

Ah, drat. Sorry, Anarion.
*is horribly mortified* :D

arianedevere December 31 2012, 00:59:14 UTC

Don't be mortified, sweetie.

*whispers* Delete, delete, delete ...

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verityburns December 30 2012, 21:05:58 UTC

Yay! Lovely to have you back, my dear!

This is really poignant and beautiful - fantastic imagery. If I could draw at all I'd be incredibly tempted to try to illustrate that last scene. Sad, but utterly gorgeous.

xxx

treelight December 30 2012, 21:26:19 UTC

You're back! That is, your stories are back! And with such a heart-wrenching tone at that ... I love it!

arianedevere December 31 2012, 00:43:43 UTC

*wibbles* The break has done you no good at all, Anarion. Why would you inflict such a sad story on us like this? *pouts*

But although it's heart-breaking, it's also beautiful. John's love for Sherlock and his hatred of causing him pain is beautifully written.

But what happened to John so that Sherlock had to find him? *frets*

defiantculture January 13 2013, 00:39:12 UTC

Yes tell us pleaaase! Loved the pic btw it was amayyzing!!!

defiantculture January 13 2013, 00:39:32 UTC

*fic