Advent Calender 2012 - Day 4

Dec 04, 2012 14:35



This is day 4 of the Advent calendar filled with little ficlets, brought to you by days_of_storm and me. We will post in rotation, so you get a story by me one day and one from her the next day, right up until Christmas.
Apart from the overall Christmasy theme we decided to take over from where the other left off in her chapter so that there will be one story ( Read more... )

anarion is evil, sherlock_bbc, slash, character insight, hurt/comfort, sorry no porn, orgasm denial, advent calendar, sherlock/john, i'm sorry

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Ahem. Please re-phrase that author's note! sabrinaphynn December 4 2012, 14:23:49 UTC
You did not "ruin the porn". What you did was - you "delayed" it, thereby heightening the tension for said sexy times. It is a time-tested writing tactic!
Also,
I am certain you are not half as sorry as Sherlock and John are at the moment!
(shhh... I am being optimistic. It is a passing phase, no doubt.)

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treksnoopy December 4 2012, 15:55:09 UTC
I don't think you're sorry at all! *pouts*

Love this anyway!

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tamzette December 4 2012, 17:35:42 UTC
Hehehe, I'm delaying going to deal with my tomato soup and roasted garlic in order to comment... hope they're not spoiled ;-)

This was adorable... and like Sabrina said, you didn't "ruin the porn", you just delayed it :-D

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verityburns December 4 2012, 18:09:38 UTC
Oh, I burst out laughing at:

"Please tell John to stop exciting you in a sexual manner. I can hear you pant."

although I must admit that I initially read the latter sentence as 'I can hear your pants', which seemed a little startling!

As for ruining the porn... well, I'm focusing on:

'it would be so much easier if you came on your own'
and
'Will you come with me?'

There's plenty of porn in my head, rest assured :D

(I'm blocking out: "He wants me in his office now", because that sort of thing is really not my cup of tea!)

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anarion December 4 2012, 18:34:42 UTC
(I'm blocking out: "He wants me in his office now", because that sort of thing is really not my cup of tea!)
Hahaha! *falls off chair laughing*

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anarion December 4 2012, 18:35:34 UTC
'it would be so much easier if you came on your own'
And now I really want to use that sentence in the way you interpreted it!

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chocolamousse December 5 2012, 00:30:03 UTC
I initially read the latter sentence as 'I can hear your pants', which seemed a little startling!
Ahem.
Verity Burns, "The Things You Hide (2/2) - Adult Edition":
travelling across town in a black London cab, John had said 'amazing' and Sherlock's cock had twitched a 'thank you'.
Case made. :D

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rox712 December 4 2012, 22:02:26 UTC
You two are going to be the death of me! I could have used some good porn on this really horrible day I'm having, but all I get is "orgasm denial". *sigh*

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verityburns December 4 2012, 22:46:44 UTC
*hugs you*

*promts Atlin to write some emergency porn...*

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rox712 December 5 2012, 08:49:41 UTC
*hugs you back*

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