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Fic: 221B - Know when you're beaten

Nov 24, 2012 10:35

Title: Know when you're beaten
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

( Day 195 - There was the sound of a body impacting into a wall and then John said ‘Jesus’ in that breathless and shocked voice. )

molly/greg, anarion is evil, 221b, hurt/comfort, prompt-fill, angst, 365 days challenge, bamf!john, surprise

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anarion November 24 2012, 10:11:14 UTC

Wow, thank you! *smoochies*

I think the only way I will ever manage a script is by piecing it together from thousand parts written in 221Bs. *haha*

tracionn November 24 2012, 11:06:33 UTC

BWWHAAAHWWA! Perfect! John is so clever and once it's proved he's not an idiot at all.
And yes, Sherlock would built up these walls - and also yes, he would let them shatter for John. Awwwww.

Who's baby shower is it btw? Lestrade's and Molly's? It is in my head until knowledge will teach me otherwise :)

purrculier1 November 24 2012, 12:40:59 UTC

Sweer baby Jesus on a tri-colored pony!
Well, don't need coffee now 'cause that first sentence shocked me awake. :)
I'll never figure out how you do it, heart in the throat suspense to
*Bwaahaahaa* laughter {my cat wants words with you about the sudden noises by-the-way) in these micro-novels of yours.

“Baby shower. What does that even mean? How do you shower it before it's born?”
Bwaaahaahaa Clueless Sherlock(that's an oxymoron)so funny. Also Greg and Molly reference! Squeee!
Thank you for a fun start to the day.

Yes, John is a bit mean here.
Right, it's JOHN who's a bit mean.*rolls eyes*
What, you've said before that "...most of what I do or did or experience winds up in John in my fics..."
Also:"Besides missed days means you'll be posting these addictive 221B's that much longer 'cause 365 days means 365 days!" :D
Still believe it was was a leap-year, want it to be a leap-year, so 366 days(yup yup yup)

rox712 November 24 2012, 12:41:50 UTC

You know I have asked myself the same question? What the hell is a baby shower? Why would you call it like that? You and me Sherlock. (Hehehe, that sentence looks good.)

chocolamousse November 24 2012, 17:23:43 UTC

You're not allowed to write "He stopped dead" just after "ready to face whatever danger there was". It's angsty. :D

But my John has a dark side anyway, as you will know when you have read most of these.
Wait, you mean fics you've already written or (argh) fics you'll write later? John, a piece of friendly advice: next time, don't throw yourself on a wall, it must be painful; just moan lasciviously, I'm sure Sherlock will come arrive as quickly.

Will be back on Tuesday with a special treat
What, a fic and a cake? :D