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Fic: 221B - Old reliable

Nov 19, 2012 19:36

Title: Old reliable
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

( Day 191 - He walked towards her and her heart skipped a beat. )

jealousy, pre-slash (sorry), friendship, 221b, hurt without comfort, prompt-fill, sorry no porn, 365 days challenge, no porn in spite of the prompt, surprise

Comments 5

treelight November 19 2012, 19:24:58 UTC

Aw, and once more I proofed that I happily follow every false trail. Naturally, I thought this was about Molly, but in the end it turned out so much better.

Also, I missed your stories those last few days!

verityburns November 19 2012, 21:56:39 UTC

Gosh, that's really powerful!

I was thinking Molly, but this is so much better - I'm feeling oddly proud at having come up with a prompt which would produce this, it's wonderful!

chocolamousse November 19 2012, 23:49:45 UTC

ANARION'S READERS (cheering): You're back! Hurrah!
ANARION (mumbling): Yeah, I'm back. Holidays are over. Dammit.
:D

He was so pretty, his dark hair, his multi-coloured eyes, his sharp cheekbones, his body in those fancy clothes and that coat.
Well, yes, but I'm sure he would be prettier without those fancy clothes and that coat. Just saying.

Aaand of course it had to be Molly so it couldn't be Molly because, all together now, Anarion doesn't do obvious. Clever and touching!

purrculier1 November 20 2012, 01:26:44 UTC

Sherlock Holmes. Sometimes she whispered that name in the dark and wished he would hear her.
Been there, done that, bought the tee-shirt, and now a member of Sherlock Anonymous{we meet in the Rose Bowl and it's still not big enough :)}

She believed in that smile, until she saw a real one, directed at that blond man he recently did not seem to be able to part from.
*Sighs* Let me add Watson Anonymous to that list *Sighs* again

Sneaky Anarion taking the path of greater heartbreak. Thought it was Molly like everyone else, and you surprised me. should start reading tags first again, but it seems like cheating and I do love your sneaky twists. This is beautiful and a powerful look from an outsider's point of view at how John already has Sherlock's heart. yes, tag says pre-slash,{poot} but not by much and I'll just bet your sorry :p

... had forgotten the slender homeless girl, clenching his money in her hand on a windy afternoon, alone on her bench.Twenty words and that will be an image to break my heart for the rest of the night. ( ... )

rox712 November 22 2012, 23:00:58 UTC

He, I'm back too, and it turns out I'm not that much back on your stories. Hope you had as much fun as I had and damn the misscomunication and not meeting at the southbank.

I think after all those funny 221bs we had, this really had to happen. *sniffs* That description of him! I could see Sherlock perfectly. (I wish!)