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Fic: 221B - Every end is a beginning

Oct 31, 2012 18:55

Title: Every end is a beginning
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

( Day 180 - That one and no one else. )

pre-slash (sorry), friendship, 221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, character insight, prompt-fill, anarion can be nice too, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john

Comments 7

chocolamousse October 31 2012, 18:38:12 UTC

Ah, I love this title! Yesterday's one was a little sad. :-)

maybe he would even like him eventually.
Aww. Insecure!Sherlock...

The crutch obviously had to go, he was no use limping.
Ouch. That's a bit harsh. Like Sherlock Before John.

That's a veeery promising beginning! I hope the next two days will be crazy in a good way. :-)

Until "But with this man he had" I thought it was still John's POV. Did you do it on purpose, because you're evil? Or maybe it's just Stupid Me. But if it's not, maybe you could say, "He had known from the first glimpse, from the first moment John limped into the lab". And I think it's "from the first moment he had limped into the lab". You can delete "first" before "moment" to keep the same word count. Oh, I'm sorry! You don't mind my rewriting of your story, don't you? :D

anarion October 31 2012, 18:54:43 UTC

You don't mind my rewriting of your story, don't you? :D
Haha, never!

Thank you, sweetie! <3

rox712 November 1 2012, 08:40:52 UTC

Never be sorry for this wonderful little glimpses that you are giving us! Even if they are pre-slash they are part of their history. I always wondered how Sherlock knew right away that John is the one.

treelight November 1 2012, 09:19:21 UTC

I wonder if he thought how to combine the ideas of "riding crop" & "John Watson" in that moment ;)

anarion November 3 2012, 15:42:16 UTC

Haha, probably! ;)

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anarion November 3 2012, 15:41:45 UTC

Thank you, typo ninja! :D

purrculier1 November 7 2012, 23:33:33 UTC

So this is Anarion being nice, dropping little nuclear submarine sized*feels*bomb*/*depthcharge*:
'But with this man he had. He had seen the strength, the pain, the fear, the stubbornness and the kindness behind those blue eyes and had decided right away. He was going to be able to put up with Sherlock, he would not be afraid to speak his mind, maybe he would even like him eventually.'
*sniffles* "maybe he would even like him eventually."{ow.}
Though how much do i adore that Sherlock sees and is attracted to{sorry notices} the character traits of John Watson. as opposed to the physical traits John was (not)noticing about Sherlock in yesterday's story.
*sighs* He knows what he needs, enough to listen to his gut instinct instead of his brain. O.K. Anarion is nice.(yup)

Yesterday's title and today's are a wonderful full circle and i'm not going to listen to you next you whinge about "I'm no good at titles" 'cause I'll wave these at you as an example of your genius.