Fic: 221B - Keepsake

Oct 22, 2012 19:13



Title: Keepsake
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

Day 173 - John was gone. )

221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, hurt/comfort, prompt-fill, angst, love, sorry no porn, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john, i'm sorry

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treelight October 22 2012, 17:57:21 UTC
OMG, where IS John, and WHY? I damn myself for my bad memory - but I'll spend many a joyful moment in looking if you already mentioned this particular story-arc in your previous little stories!

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anarion October 22 2012, 19:05:41 UTC
Sorry for the confusion. Maybe I should add an explanation.

This is the story were John left Sherlock. I have hinted at it. You will eventually learn why he left. And probably why he came back. But we all know that he did come back, because they are MARRIED now. :)

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treelight October 23 2012, 21:16:06 UTC
Yes, of course I know there will be a major happy ending :)
It's still nice to get reassured by you!

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purrculier1 October 22 2012, 18:56:52 UTC
If I bring chips and brownies can I come to pitypa...um, cheer-up party too. Want to leave brownie crumbs all over Anarion's journal 'cause she is a Meanie, McMeanie writer.

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anarion October 22 2012, 19:09:35 UTC
Oy! Pick those up! Or I will hide ALL the porn! :P

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purrculier1 October 22 2012, 19:38:51 UTC

Oy! Pick those up! Or I will hide ALL the porn! :P

Golly Gee Willikers. So bossy, not like you would get ants evil cliff-hangers and now threats of no porns to soothe shattered nerves.
*packs up rest of brownies* and *hands* to Anarion for trip.
*smooches*Be safe. :}

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purrculier1 October 22 2012, 18:51:01 UTC
'John was gone.'
Ok, cryptic and ominious. um, Yay?

'Sherlock woke with that already familiar sense of everything being dulled by prolonged exposure to searing pain.'
*Puckernuts* this level of evil, is puppy kicking evil. um, Yay?

'but he could not fool Mrs Hudson. She saw. But she played her part for his sake.'
Why is Sherlock hurting? Where the *HELL* is John? Thank God for Mrs. Hudson.(kitten begging for tummy-scratch ignoring evil) still, Yay?

“Not your housekeeper.” But she made the tea anyway.
Will repeat Thank God, for Mrs. "not your housekeeper, just your second mom" Hudson.

Inside was a small insect in amber.
It was a honeybee.
And yet it was so much more than that.
It was a promise.
(And it reads like a prayer)

will be travelling the next two days and will have no internet access. Therefore I won't post on Tuesday and Wednesday. Sorry. Normal service will be resumed on Thursday. :)
Don't even have a description for this level of Evil, You drop a Tardis-like cliffhangery 221B yes, Tardis-like. No way this much story ( ... )

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anarion October 22 2012, 19:10:36 UTC
Where the *HELL* is John?

This is the story were John left Sherlock. I have hinted at it. You will eventually learn why he left. And probably why he came back. But we all know that he did come back, because they are MARRIED now. :)

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rox712 October 22 2012, 20:59:49 UTC
Oh my God, not only is she threatening the nice party people, no, she is actually answering the same answer to everyone! What have we done to you? Don't you love us any more?

Yes, I remember your hints, but I choose to delete them. Now it's here and it is by far the most angsty and painful thing I've ever read from you. You brought me to tears with a few sentences. And that honeybee did a lot to mend my heart too, just so you know.

Travel safe and be back soon!

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anarion October 25 2012, 17:47:36 UTC
Sorry for the tears, sweetie! And I'm glad the honeybee gave you comfort. It did so for Sherlock too.

Thanks!

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chocolamousse October 23 2012, 00:11:31 UTC
First I read when he seldom had been able to sleep when John had wanted him to and thought, "Ah, I remember, it's the story she told in I watch you while you sleep , in which John leaves partly because Sherlock is never in bed with him when he wakes up. I remember the happy ending. Right. I can deal with that." Then I read the last lines and went, "WHAT? JOHN NEVER SENT A HONEYBEE TO SHERLOCK IN I WATCH YOU WHILE YOU SLEEP SO IT'S NOT I WATCH YOU WHILE YOU SLEEP IT IS NOT THE SAME VERSE OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS FRESH ANGST???" Atlin's story, and now this. I hate you. (But just a bit. And in a nice way.)

I love the last lines, so heart-warming. I can't wait to read the rest of the story!

You will eventually learn why he left. And probably why he came back.
What do you mean, why he came back? *is indignant* He comes back because he can't not come back, okay? John comes back, always, just ask Atlin! :D

I usually do not do what people expect of me.
*thinks deeply about it*
I expect you to never write porn again.

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anarion October 25 2012, 17:44:54 UTC
SO IT'S NOT I WATCH YOU WHILE YOU SLEEP IT IS NOT THE SAME VERSE OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS FRESH ANGST???
Yeah, I sadly realised that 'I watch you...' does not really fit in with this verse. :(
Had to come up with a new reason for John leaving.

*thinks deeply about it*
I expect you to never write porn again.
Hm, everybody always expects me to not do what they say. Maybe I should do what they say just once? :P
(Apart from that, brilliant idea!)

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