Fic: 221B - Desires are nourished by delays

Oct 06, 2012 20:07



Title: Desires are nourished by delays
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

Day 157 - He’s on fire and if John doesn't do something soon, he will probably spontaneously combust. )

sex on the horizon, first time, 221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, kissing, prompt-fill, romance, love, one bed, 365 days challenge, unresolved sexual tension, sherlock/john

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chocolamousse October 6 2012, 18:34:48 UTC
Desires are nourished by delays
I suppose this is your motto as regards Taken?
*looks daggers at you*

John wouldn’t do something though because after their first night just lying next to each other, the combination of agitation, not sleeping and not eating in three days caused Sherlock to throw up in the bathroom.
Well, that kind of kills the mood indeed.

“Let’s take it slow. I just want to hold you and kiss you and go to sleep next to you.”
Because he's afraid he could overwhelm Sherlock? That's why he went tense for a second? (I want to be sure I understand properly! :D)

He wants, but he doesn’t know how to ask for it. It’s frustrating.
And so Sherlock.

Well, now it only remains for you to tell us about their real first night. ;-)

I think it's "John made him breakfast and asked if he had slept last night." And I think the "talking about a deadly disease (no one has it though)" warning is not relevant today. Unless you talk about love. But in this case I think that both Sherlock and John have it. ;-)

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anarion October 6 2012, 19:01:16 UTC
And there she goes, fucking up my word count again... ;)
You're right. Thanks!

Because he's afraid he could overwhelm Sherlock?
Yes. Wait, what did you think? Should I rephrase it?

tell us about their real first night.
Tell you? Can't you hear them? Sherlock can be quite vocal. *ahem*

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chocolamousse October 6 2012, 19:20:25 UTC
No no no, don't rephrase it, it's quite clear. It's just John going tense for a second who made wonder if I hadn't missed something. I see angst in all your fics now, and you're the only one to blame. :D

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anarion October 6 2012, 19:03:36 UTC
Ash -> pickle -> spaceship -> blowjob
I feel strangely compelled to put all four words into one 221B now. And look, we already have the b-word!

You grow with the challenge. Quite literally (the last part, not the first). ;)

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anarion October 6 2012, 19:39:53 UTC
Haha, yes, let's do it!

If it doesn't work out, I'll at least leave the blowjob in. :D
Which reminds me that I started writing the final chapter for 'Blow-by-blow'!

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sabrinaphynn October 6 2012, 19:41:31 UTC
Details, please, on a post card.
And a nice relief from angstfest.
:D

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anarion October 7 2012, 08:06:13 UTC
And here I was, about to send you a four-page letter. A postcard it is then. ;)

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sabrinaphynn October 7 2012, 19:52:05 UTC
Careful what I wish for, eh? Oh well.... (tease!)

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motmotmot October 7 2012, 03:26:28 UTC
http://anarion.livejournal.com/34616.html

Was this the first time they shared a be d? That story was adorable.

Is John going to make Sherlock beg?

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anarion October 7 2012, 08:05:16 UTC
Oh, I had forgotten about that story! *headdesk*
Yes, that was the first time they shared a bed! Though John never knew. Maybe I need to remedy this. :)

I don't think he would make him beg their first time together. Well, maybe a little. ;)

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rox712 October 8 2012, 09:06:37 UTC
Hmmm, another one that is packed with so much story that I can't believe it's only 221 words. Horny!Sherlock and Caring!John are becoming my favorites.

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