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Fic: 221B - Things unsaid

Sep 12, 2012 20:10

Title: Things unsaid
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

( Day 135 - Sherlock, I don’t want you to touch other people. )

jealousy, 221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, character insight, hurt/comfort, lestrade, prompt-fill, possessive!john, love, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john

Comments 7

sabrinaphynn September 12 2012, 18:28:28 UTC

Ah... Double speak conversations. Good thing these two are on the same wavelength!

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So, did you all have 'Octopus's Garden' stuck in your head yesterday? :D
Ummm. No. (But- only because the kids came home while I was reading it and distracted me.)

chocolamousse September 12 2012, 18:28:54 UTC

Aww. So sweet. I feel a bit sad for John; for once it's not Sherlock who is insecure. I love that they don't need words to understand each other, and their smiles at the end. Also, I first read "This time they leave behind a baffled body", which was a little odd. :D.

purrculier1 September 12 2012, 20:21:43 UTC

I give up. From now on I will stick with appreciating the results of how your brain works and stop trying to figure how.

prompt: massage= insecure John/reassuring Sherlock sub-text conversation.(warm fuzzies/happy sighs)
*APPLAUSE*Really, take a bow for how extraordinary this one is.*MORE APPLAUSE*

Have a question though, what is a 'dead musquash'. (well the dead part I understand.);D

So, did you all have 'Octopus's Garden' stuck in your head yesterday? :D
'Yellow Submarine' actually, I think my subconscious wanted to see the 'Octopus's Garden' from a safe place. *laughs*

anarion September 13 2012, 06:28:16 UTC

what is a "'dead musquash'"
Sorry, that's what my dictionary said. Apparently the more common term ist muskrat:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Muskrat

*goes to change it*

anarion September 13 2012, 06:28:57 UTC

Also!

Yellow Submarine' actually, I think my subconscious wanted to see the 'Octopus's Garden' from a safe place. *laughs*
Hahaha! :D

rox712 September 13 2012, 06:28:58 UTC

I have to confess that the image of Sherlock giving a massage to someone young and pretty fried a few braincells. Sorry John, you know that you're still the only one for me, ehm, Sherlock, I mean for Sherlock! But that was some very nice visual.

(and yes to the Octopus question *shakes fist*)

tracionn September 13 2012, 11:44:05 UTC

Love it so much. My heart wants to burst again here. You're a heart burster!
*sniff* It's so moving!
I also loved how Lestrade is used to their silent exchnages, the ones that lay beneath their spoken ones, by now.
And again, this one just captures the series so perfectly as we are used to their way with each othe too, aren't we?
Awesome one!