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Fic: Another blink in time - (6/9)

Jun 14, 2011 20:44

Tuesday again! Next chapter featuring sleeping Sherlock, happy John and a plan! :D

Title: Another blink in time
Author: anarion
Words: 1311
Warnings: UST
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Beta: still verityburns, the best beta in the world ♥♥♥
Disclaimer: Sadly the characters are not mine and no money is made (that would be sooo cool!).

( Chapter 6 )

fanfiction, character: sherlock holmes, sherlock_bbc, another blink in time, character: john watson, writing

Comments 13

sabrinaphynn June 14 2011, 22:55:23 UTC

Oh, my heart. Lovely, but so sad.
Jenn

anarion June 21 2011, 08:48:18 UTC

Sorry to make you sad. It will get better eventually.

Maybe the kitty will help? :)

sabrinaphynn June 21 2011, 09:16:20 UTC

not you making me sad. Sometimes it is nice to have something that releases the tears.
But I love the kitty licking the screen.
J

sif_aka_joanna June 15 2011, 00:20:50 UTC

I am loving this. I'm sad for John's loneliness but hopeful that it will all work out. I will wait not terribly patiently for the next episode.

anarion June 21 2011, 08:46:49 UTC

Glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting. :)

I am pretty sure it will all work out. Next chapter should be up next week.

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anarion June 21 2011, 08:37:10 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment! ♥♥♥

It makes me especially happy when people say things like 'well-said', because English is not my first language and sometimes I struggle to put things right.
*happy dance*

Sorry for the waiting, if the fever goes down sometime soon I will work on chapter 7 and John's plan.
Until then you can have fun with the blowjob follow-up: Go here

ellie_hell June 15 2011, 13:39:31 UTC

Oh yeah! I love a man with a plan! But poor John, it was so sad to see his thought process going from 'I'll just stand here on the other side of the door' to stroking Sherlock's hair while in bed with him.

It's a little scary, but I love John's hypothesis that Sherlock buried their past lives under his massive intellect or that he deleted it. It sounds like the kind of thing he would do.

You continue to write very, very beautiful things. I think that was my favourite part: He wondered what kind of noises Sherlock made. And who had had the privilege to hear them. If anybody ever had. Had anybody ever touched that wonderful body? Sherlock’s beautiful and skilful hands never giving pleasure to anybody would be a terrible sin. I'm torn between 'yes, it would be a sin' and 'NOOO JUST JOHN, NO ONE BUT JOHN CAN TOUCH HIM!

I hope you'll have a nice family meeting and... YAY BLOWJOB!

anarion June 21 2011, 08:41:25 UTC

You continue to write the most wonderful comments! :)

Thank you! ♥♥♥

Also thanks for quoting your favourite part. And don't worry, 'yes, it would be a sin' and 'NOOO JUST JOHN, NO ONE BUT JOHN CAN TOUCH HIM! are not mutually exclusive. :D

Family weekend was great!

verityburns June 15 2011, 17:53:39 UTC

I feel so sad for John in this chapter, but it's a beautiful image of him sitting on the bed with a sleeping Sherlock and stroking through his hair.

I'm keeping my fingers crossed for his plan!