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Fic: 221B - Kiss it better

Oct 25, 2013 18:08

Title: Kiss it better
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 349.

( Day 349 - “That was not the most intelligent thing to do, you know that, right?” )

sex on the horizon, 221b, humour, sherlock_bbc, slash, hurt/comfort, teasing, prompt-fill, an almost gravitational pull, love, bamf!john, 365 days challenge, banter, sherlock/john

Comments 5

chocolamousse October 25 2013, 17:01:19 UTC

Yay, you're back! :D It's funny, the banter is lovely, there's a bit of angst (“Because the doctor said no exhausting physical activities for a couple of days”) but a happy ending (there's a "sex on the horizon" tag). I am pleased. :D And I hope life confuses you in a good way, like in, "I can't believe life is so fantastic suddenly". :-)

P.S. I also hope Sherlock is joking when he says John has been gutted by a knife because otherwise I agree with him, you can't have sex for a couple of days (and maybe more) if you've just been eviscerated. :D

rox712 October 25 2013, 20:32:04 UTC

Oh, I've missed our boys and that beautiful dialogue of yours!

ledasdaughter October 25 2013, 20:53:19 UTC

you write about feet? I am shocked! XD

verityburns October 25 2013, 21:36:48 UTC

Oh, your dialogue is just a joy! Lovely fic - thank you, sweetie!

veniachan November 4 2013, 18:45:17 UTC

Poor John! He was hurt and on top of that he's horny. But it's a good sign, he's looking at the bright side of things :)

Confused by life, yeah I know that too - bad and good ways as well, hope you experience the good one!