Comments | anarion: Fic: 221B - My chemical romance

anarion

Fic: 221B - My chemical romance

Sep 11, 2013 19:58

Title: My chemical romance
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 345.

( Day 345 - “I still don’t understand.” )

221b, fluff, sherlock_bbc, slash, john is a saint, insecure!sherlock, prompt-fill, romance, an almost gravitational pull, sherlock having thinky thoughts, love, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john

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anarion September 11 2013, 18:11:42 UTC

Atlin! *glomps*

Why would this be part of a longer story? Doesn't it feel ok like this?

verityburns September 11 2013, 19:02:18 UTC

Oh, this is wonderful! I can really hear the desperation of Sherlock's need to understand - you've conveyed that brilliantly!

As for the ending... I'm having fun debating whether John's going to show Sherlock the chemistry book... or smack him with it!

veniachan October 16 2013, 20:50:57 UTC

"I'm having fun debating whether John's going to show Sherlock the chemistry book... or smack him with it!"
My thoughts exactly XD

rox712 September 13 2013, 09:01:58 UTC

Hehehe, I thought that John got up to drag Sherlock to the bedroom to finaly convince him. Yeah, that's where my mind always goes to.

veniachan October 16 2013, 20:55:34 UTC

Poor Sherlock. But he's really a wonder! He's able to be so self-confident and self-conscious at the same time.
I mean:
“But if it’s in my head then I can delete it. Therefore it can’t be real.”
You deleted the operation of the solar system, honey, so is it unreal as well? :P