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Fic: 221B - Protection detail

Jun 05, 2013 18:43

Title: Protection detail
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 317.

( Day 317 - “We will never talk about this again.” )

221b, brothers, sherlock_bbc, slash, no john, fight, lestrade, prompt-fill, an almost gravitational pull, angst, love, 365 days challenge, epic friendship, sherlock/john

Comments 9

treelight June 5 2013, 22:18:43 UTC

Ha! I could take Lestrade for a cup of coffee, so that Sherlock can finish what he begun.
But Mycroft will surely know what to do, too.

221b_hound June 5 2013, 22:49:58 UTC

This gave me the shivers. I wonder if in time the creeper won't wish that the younger Holmes had seen to his fate, rather than the elder.

purrculier1 June 5 2013, 23:34:45 UTC

*Full body shudder*
Jesus wept, that was...that was...that was...brilliant and dark and scary as a *soft giggle* heard behind you in an empty room.

Your Dark!Sherlock scares the fertilizer out of me,
Don’t you think John deserves to know?”

"No.
Fuck.(sorry) One word and it rolled through my head as audible as thunder,
put goosebumps down my arms, and raised the hair on the back of my neck.

'I' will keep him safe in the future.
And the thunder rolled again. In a certain someone's nobody hurts what's mine! baritone *whimper*

I wish,wish,wish that Lestrade had been just a *little* bit late.I probably don't mean that, I hope I don't really mean that.*hangs head in shame* I'm not a very nice person, 'cause, yup, I did so mean that!

He isn’t sure how to deal with this. If he merely arrests the guy, he will be out in no time. He closes his eyes for a second, sighs and then calls Sherlock’s brother.*Goosebumps on goosebumps*. Lestrade called Mycroft! The outhouse contents just hit the occilating air-ciculator for the stalker ( ... )

anarion June 6 2013, 05:24:20 UTC

Purr! You are here! I missed you! *hugs fiercely*

You know, I actually hadn't thought about John finding out or not. Hm, I might need to write this. *wanders off thinking*

purrculier1 June 6 2013, 22:57:50 UTC

Missed you too! *grabs you in a bear hug and swings you around* Wheee!
wanders off thinking
Uh-Oh, I don't think I can handle what John"What the hell were you thinking, you economy-sized berk!"Watson thinks about Sherlock trying to hide this from him. :)

phoenix_glow June 6 2013, 00:30:18 UTC

I love how you create an entire story, and entire world in only 221 words. Wow.

arianedevere June 6 2013, 19:46:13 UTC

Oh, stalker, you are going to wish that Sherlock had killed you. Once Mycroft is involved, you may continue to live, but you will never see the light of day again. *shivers*

This is possibly the most chilling 221 I've ever read. Well done, sweetie!