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Fic: 221B - The Complexity of Ice cream

May 24, 2013 18:17

Title: The Complexity of Ice cream
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 307.

( Day 307 - John Watson is a very complex man. )

pre-slash (sorry), epiphany, 221b, humour, sherlock_bbc, lust, longing, prompt-fill, an almost gravitational pull, 365 days challenge, banter, unresolved sexual tension, sherlock/john

Comments 7

chocolamousse May 24 2013, 16:49:55 UTC

Sherlock was lying bare-chested on the sofa, the semi-molten ice lolly in his right hand forgotten over his new favourite topic: John.
Please let me savour this image. *savours* I feel like the lolly. Semi-molten.

Something fierce jolted through Sherlock at the sight of that, something that felt remarkably like that time when he was four and peed against an electric fence (stupid!), something that it took him a while to recognize - lust.
You mean John makes Sherlock feel as if he were electrocuted via his penis? Hmm. That's... interesting. :D

I actually see this as pre-slash. What did you think?
I had horrible doubts when I read with a friendly grin. Because, let's be honest, would your grin be friendly if you were lusting for Sherlock and he were lying bare-chested on the sofa right in front of your eyes? Now that I think about it, it was obvious though. Dipping your finger into the ice cream which has melted on your flatmate's naked stomach and licking it clean is a very heterosexual and absolutely UST-less thing to do. I think ( ... )

sabrinaphynn May 24 2013, 17:16:18 UTC

This just cries out for art. But even without, 'tis a very pretty picture.

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verityburns May 27 2013, 22:47:02 UTC

Yes, we were on the floor with the ice cream! Good Lord - next you'll be claiming you don't even remember meeting me...

anarion May 28 2013, 05:48:11 UTC

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treelight May 25 2013, 00:12:42 UTC

Yes, you can count it as pre-slash, but it certainly is one of its hottest variants I've ever read :)

verityburns May 27 2013, 22:49:24 UTC

Oh, that was a good night! Kitchen parties are the best parties - especially when there is ice-cream (and talk of porn... which was kind of inevitable under the circumstances.)

I love this as pre-slash - I actually find it hotter than I would were they already together. But then you know me; I'm all about the antici...