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Fic: 221B - I, Robot (1/2)

May 22, 2013 18:23

Title: I, Robot (1/2)
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 305.

( Day 305 - Why on earth are you so angry? )

jealousy, epiphany, anarion is evil, 221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, fight, prompt-fill, an almost gravitational pull, love, one bed, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john, surprise

Comments 5

kizzia May 22 2013, 17:18:55 UTC

Since LJ has eaten the last three comments I left on your 221B's I'm hoping it's fourth time lucky with todays :)
I really like this. I see insecurity laced through Sherlock's character and this is a wonderful illustration of how it would manifest in the early days of their relationship.
Given your note at the bottom of this, I thought I should say that I've always loved the way you write but I can see changes, little ones, like word placement and turns of phrase that make these later ones zing a little more. And there is an almost indefinable sense of confidence that I don't think was there before.
Oh God, now I'm pontificating and probably sound patronising. Which isn't meant. I just mean that I think you are great!

chocolamousse May 22 2013, 17:37:54 UTC

Ahem. I'm going to send you a PM because... *looks at you suspiciously* I'll probably feel ridiculous when you post the second part but oh well. :D

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chocolamousse May 22 2013, 18:01:08 UTC

I have a super clever, extremely subtle and absolutely brilliant theory about this fic (she says with her usual modesty) but I can't tell now because I don't want to spoil anything and not at all because if I say it everybody is going to be in stitches and point at me and call me a nutter. If I'm right, I'll yell, "I KNEW IT! I TOLD YOU! DIDN'T I TELL YOU? TELL THEM I TOLD YOU, ANARION, TELL THEM!" in a very humble way. If I'm wrong, I'll pretend my LJ has been hacked and I'm not the one who sent the PM to Anarion. Or who wrote this comment. No, wait, there's a flaw here...

treelight May 22 2013, 20:19:40 UTC

Just wanted to let you know, I'm still here and still read your stories eagerly each day - life just still doesn't allow me much time to write comments.
The unpredictability is one of the things I love about your writing - especially since I happily follow the wrong leads every time :)
Poor Sherlock is jealous. Aw, I want to comfort him and tell him that he need not fear to loose John as easily as that (if ever).

phoenix_glow June 5 2013, 23:51:40 UTC

I absolutely love it when you don't take the obvious route. Brillant stuff!!