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Fic: 221B - On display

May 21, 2013 18:10

Title: On display
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 304.

( Day 304 - Greg’s eyes wander through the exhibition room. )

221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, character insight, lestrade, prompt-fill, an almost gravitational pull, love, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john

Comments 3

chocolamousse May 21 2013, 16:36:11 UTC

They always seem to know where the other is, even in a room full of people. Only God knows how.
Well, it's easy. John has just to follow the voices saying, "Wow, look at this gorgeous man, good Lord he's hot." And Sherlock has just to follow the voices saying, "Aww, look at this adorable man, good Lord he's cute." (And hot too, yes, I know your proclivity.) :D

Also, it's lovely. I like the idea of Sherlock and John drawn to each other like magnets, and the final image is quite poetic.

verityburns May 21 2013, 17:24:39 UTC

Oh, this is gorgeous! I adore the concept, the story is really well constructed, and that last line is just... wow! Powerful stuff, sweetie :D

tamzette May 21 2013, 18:14:09 UTC

I'm a bad reader. I've not been commenting. But I have been reading, I promise!!

I love this one. It's just so in character, and so wonderfully S&J.

I'm probably still going to be an erratic commenter from now on (I have just over 4 weeks before I'm due to give birth, and then I'll be lucky if I manage to check my email once a week), but know that I love your writing, and I read every story!!

(*waves at Atlin* same goes for you re the reading and loving but not commenting! I just haven't had much time on my hands where I didn't feel exhausted or crappy!)