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Fic: 221B - What is it like in your funny little brains?

May 17, 2013 19:32

Title: What is it like in your funny little brains?
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 303.

( Day 303 - He sounds as if I say those things just to vex him. )

case, molly, 221b, snarky sherlock, humour, sherlock_bbc, slash, lestrade, sophisticated title is sophisticated, prompt-fill, an almost gravitational pull, sherlock having thinky thoughts, bamf!john, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john

Comments 2

sweetlatejuliet May 18 2013, 14:28:37 UTC

Ack - didn't mean to post this anonymously the first time!

This is so excellently in character. It really reads like a transcript of the show if Sherlock's thoughts were also put into words. I especially like the bossy regard for John (John, go home) and the noticing Molly, not having enough data to make a conclusion, and not giving that a second thought.

verityburns May 20 2013, 11:39:12 UTC

Is that true about the rum on the feet? It sounds true. I think I'll keep mine for drowning my chocolate cake, as the good Lord intended, thank you :D

Really excellent Sherlock POV here - I love his internal thoughts, especially the 'Dear God.', that was brilliant!