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Fic: 221B - A counter offer

May 09, 2013 18:26

Title: A counter offer
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 298.

( Day 298 - Being tossed off on your own kitchen counter with olive oil as a lube substitute should not be as hot as it turned out to be. )

221b, humour, handjob, attention: porn!, an almost gravitational pull, anarion can be nice too, sex, love, sherlock/john, sherlock_bbc, slash, teasing, you're welcome, prompt-fill, husbands, sex right here, convenient boner, 365 days challenge, orgasm denial, orgasm

Comments 3

sweetlatejuliet May 14 2013, 01:08:40 UTC

This is sweet! In a couple ways, ha. :) I totally read "I feel like cake" in the literal sense, and it's exactly the kind of post-coital non sequitur John might say as a substitute for "That was great." Love it!

anarion May 14 2013, 14:22:24 UTC

I am so glad to hear that it sounds credible coming out of John's mouth for other people too. I was wondering about that.

Thank you for your lovely comment! <3

verityburns May 14 2013, 09:48:16 UTC

"I feel like cake.”

LOL! Brilliant delivery of that line. Great story - and I love (and agree with) the dedication :D