[Fic] you strangle my heart

[analineblue]

Title: you strangle my heart
Pairing/Characters: Jack/Ianto, Gwen
Warnings/Spoilers: NSFW
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~1850
Summary: All week, Ianto's been like this and it’s been driving him crazy - the way he’s been thinking all these ridiculous, sappy, quirky-indie-pop-lyric type things about Jack, about his feelings. It really isn’t like him at

Comments

[manikineko]

This was awesome, darling and your icon is made of win ;-) Although I really enjoyed the porn bit of this story I must say the first bit in Gwen's apartment is the most brilliant. The way you described Jack's appearance and the cross-eyed thing and basically all of Ianto's thoughts, just brilliant *says it like the Doctor* You should write more porn at work, you would do both your readers and yourself a favour, hihi.

[analineblue]

Aww, thanks! ^_^ I'm glad you liked the part with Gwen. :) (I believe that it's better than the porn, that's for sure, because... IDK, I'm out of practice? ^_~)

And hehe, that cross-eyed thing. I'm not sure Ianto even knows what he meant there! *laughs* ^_~

I'm really glad you liked this though~ *hugs*

[pocky_slash]

I don't normally read porn, but I read this anyway and UGH. That's it! The beginning! That's exactly what I want out of fandom, Ianto goofily, embarrassingly in love with Jack and hanging out with a Gwen who is supportive and incredibly amused by the entire thing.

(I'm sure everyone else is going to comment like "OMG PORN!" but honestly, the beginning just made me SO HAPPY IN MY HEART OMG.)

[analineblue]

I have to be in the right mood to read and/or write porn, so I know what you mean. ^_~

AND YES. I love that dynamic, too! Ianto doesn't get to be goofy-in-love enough, you know? People are always dying, or the world is ending or something, right? XD; This was rather refreshing to write for that reason, actually. ^_~

Anyway. *stops rambling* I'm really glad you enjoyed this. <3

[aviv_b]

That was lovely. The whole goofy Ianto and his confession and Gwen being so nice and patient, and of course Jack appearing and enbarassed Ianto and then we had PORN! It was a full feast of goodness.

[analineblue]

Aww, thank you~! I'm glad all of those elements worked for you! I definitely enjoyed throwing them all in there at once, lol. ^_~

[nancybrown]

Writing porn at work is the best thing ever.

[analineblue]

It really kind of is. ^_~ Thanks for reading! <3

[jinnandtonic]

I love your stories, I am always so excited when I see you've posted a new one! By all means, keep doing them at work! lol

[analineblue]

Aww, thank you! It makes me really happy to hear that~ *hugs* <3 I'm glad this one didn't disappoint! ^_~