Comments | ana_grrl: Jayne Fic: Synchronal (PG-13;R)

ana_grrl

Jayne Fic: Synchronal (PG-13;R)

Mar 25, 2006 17:57

Title: Synchronal
Character: Jayne
Words: about 2800
Rating: PG-13 (maybe R in one spot)
Summary: Something's gone wrong.
Notes: Birthday fic for unovis_lj. HAPPY BIRTHDAY (yes I know it's slightly early)!! Beta by the lovely valiant. Many thanks ( Read more... )

au, firefly fic, gen

Comments 65

taramonk March 26 2006, 00:26:47 UTC

Oh, wow. What a hell of a journey. Poor Jayne. *heart aches*

This is intensely wonderful.

ana_grrl March 26 2006, 04:15:11 UTC

This is intensely wonderful.

:D Thank you!

kitakatzz March 26 2006, 01:50:36 UTC

Ack! Love. So much love for this.

ana_grrl March 26 2006, 04:15:47 UTC

Thank you so much! :D

kelly_girl March 26 2006, 02:07:18 UTC

Dude! It's Jayne as Worf and sometimes he won the tournament and sometimes he didn't. Other times he's married to Troi and other times he's not. Loved seeing Jayne go from not understanding anything to almost understading everything. Hee the part with Mal grabbing his ass and Jayne remembering it later is hilarious.

lunabee34 March 26 2006, 02:22:21 UTC

OMG, I was gonna do a Star Trek analogy myself, except I was gonna go with "All Good Things." LOL

In any case, it's a wonderfully well-written story that I thoroughly enjoyed.

ana_grrl March 26 2006, 04:18:06 UTC

Thank you! It was really fun to write too; I love messing around with Jayne's head.

ana_grrl March 26 2006, 04:17:27 UTC

Dude! I totally loved that Next Generation episode. It's one of my favourites, and I was definitely thinking about it when I wrote this. Except, you know, with less of the Troi, lol,

Hee the part with Mal grabbing his ass and Jayne remembering it later is hilarious.

It's TRAUMA! lol!

Thank you!

luvmax1 March 26 2006, 02:17:41 UTC

This was just brilliant. I loved the Simon/Jayne "thrust" of course, and Jayne Cobb, assassin-companion- that's priceless. But Jayne on the battlefield, as a Fed killed by Mal, Zoe with one arm- it's a little heartbreaking, too. Great job, as always.

ana_grrl March 26 2006, 04:19:33 UTC

I loved the Simon/Jayne "thrust" of course

Shiny! I just couldn't resist. I'm glad you liked the other bits too (I think Jayne and Mal on the battlefield is one of my favourite scenes). Thank you :)

unovis March 26 2006, 02:26:44 UTC

What a wonderful surprise! Thank you so much.

I love this splintered Jayne, cycling through the crew, and the pain, and the cutting. Because he's been eaten and sexed up and ordered around and stabbed and Mal has grabbed his ass.
Works beautifully and I'm going to be seeing him as Inara for the rest of the night, thanks...

ana_grrl March 26 2006, 04:20:44 UTC

HAPPY BIRTHDAY (still slightly early, sorry). I'm really glad you enjoyed this! I hope you have a great day tomorrow. Do you have any fun plans?

unovis March 27 2006, 21:45:07 UTC

Came back to read it again ;) So grateful and pleased you're still writing.

Didn't do much for my birthday, but it was very pleasant. Taz and I read and talked and ate chocolate and played ball with Coco.

ana_grrl March 28 2006, 14:11:51 UTC

I'm so relieved and happy that you enjoyed this! It sounds like a you had such a nice, relaxing birthday. That's the way it should be, I always figure.