SGA Fic: An Imprecise Process (Lorne-centric, PG)

[ana_grrl]

Title: An Imprecise Process
Pairing/Characters: Lorne/Sheppard, Keller, Zelenka, team.
Rating: PG
Words: About 2400
Spoilers: Up to 4x10
Summary: Explain the nature of the disconnection.
Notes: Many thanks to bitter_crimson for beta and encouragement!

Comments

[sheryden]

Nice job. I was hoping for a follow-up to "This Mortal Coil!" I'm starting to really consider Lorne/Sheppard as a possible pairing.

[ana_grrl]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[ana_grrl]

Creepy! But so plausible! But creepy! And endearing!

Awww! You say the nicest things!

Dear Robot!Lorne - you are surprisingly hot. Oh, wait. I'm not surprised.

Hey, nice icon!

[bitter_crimson]

*bounces* I still think it's great, obviously. ;)

It looks like there's an extra line of spacing after the "At first, it made the role unclear. Who is Major Lorne to Sheppard? How should he act on Sheppard's memories?" bit.

*pets robot!Lorne*

[ana_grrl]

Yay, thank you! And thanks again for your help!

I fixed the line space :D

[shara50]

Excellent but a little creepy. Thanks for the great read!!

[ana_grrl]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, creepiness and all :D

[kellifer_fic]

Awesome.

[ana_grrl]

Yay! Thank you :D