SGA fic: On the ground, off-world (Lorne/McKay, NC-17)

[ana_grrl]

Title: On the ground, off-world
Pairing: McKay/Lorne
Rating: NC-17
Words: About 2300
Summary: "Shut up, Major," McKay mutters, "and take off your pants."
Notes: Many thanks to seikaitsukimizu for beta and reassurance!

Comments

[lyrstzha]

Awesomely delicious! Not only is it wonderfully, porntastically hot, but also I love the differences between Evan and Sheppard's teams. It's so cool that Evan's team is getting laid right and left while Sheppard's team is always getting shot at instead. That tickles me no end! Plus, you know how I love kickass dialogue like this. Woot!

[ana_grrl]

Awesomely delicious!

Oh, thank god!

Not only is it wonderfully, porntastically hot

So much relief, you have no idea!

It's so cool that Evan's team is getting laid right and left while Sheppard's team is always getting shot at instead

Someone (or some team) has to catch the breaks, right? It's only fair!

Plus, you know how I love kickass dialogue like this.

Yay! 100x yay! Thank you so much!

[bkwyrm]

wow, hot hot hot.
But I want to hear about the "chatty" sex with Parrish.....

[ana_grrl]

wow, hot hot hot.

Thank you :D

But I want to hear about the "chatty" sex with Parrish.

...in which they have sex in a treehouse, and Parrish keeps getting distracted by the vines that grow up the walls, and the flowers that frame the ladder. He keeps talking about it all, and Lorne both annoyed (stop with the botany chat! get with sex), and turned on (it's the tone Parrish has when he's talking about the botany stuff).

[bitter_crimson]

SO MUCH I LOVED IN THIS. Even though as you know, I'm not obsessed with Lorne. SO YOU'D THINK MY FAVORITE PARTS IN THIS WOULD BE THE BITS WITH MCKAY? BUT ACTUALLY, NO! I MEAN, THOSE WERE GOOD TO! V. V. HOT! BUT! IN THE BEGINNING, WITH THE,

"Don't take this the wrong way, sir," Stackhouse had said later, "but you were the best I've ever had." It had been a little awkward between them for a few days, but eventually Stackhouse had gotten over it.

AND THE,

Privately, he'd thought it should count because so many people had been watching. (OKAY I WOULD SO TOTALLY WATCH.)

And okay, I obviously just need to shut up because there too many super-quotable parts in the McKay bits too, I LOVE THIS WHOLE THING, SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. But, okay, the Stackhouse bit was my favorite. XD

[ana_grrl]

Even though as you know, I'm not obsessed with Lorne

WOE! Poor Lorne! He needs your love!

But, okay, the Stackhouse bit was my favorite

Yay! I got a little absurdly happy about the Stackhouse bit, even thought it was like 5 lines.

Thank you!

[bitter_crimson]

OBVIOUSLY YOU JUST NEED TO KEEP WRITING MORE AND MORE AND MORE LORNE FIC, YOU'LL GET ME THERE SOMEDAY.

Also in my previous comment, *TOO

[ana_grrl]

I can work hard for the cause!!

[lunabee34]

Aahhahaahahahahahhahaa

This is AWESOME! Hot, porny, sexy AWESOMENESS!

Also, funny.

Damn I need me some SGA icons with which to register my two thumbs up. LOL

[ana_grrl]

Hot, porny, sexy AWESOMENESS!

OMG! I'm thrilled you like it so much! Thank you!

sga_noticeboard often has people announcing that they've made icons. That's how I find my icons (except for some of the Lorne ones, which I think I got at lorne_parrish and majorlorne_fans).

[lunabee34]

Ooooh, thanks.

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[krysalys]

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I was waiting for Lorne to interrupt Rodney at the end there and say "Who says we have to wait until you take a rotation with my team, McKay?"
*snicker* But even Lorne doesn't have that much of a death wish, does he? XD
Oh, GUH.
-----}-@

Re: fd;kjhaf;woi3ur'piosjd

[ana_grrl]

But even Lorne doesn't have that much of a death wish, does he?

Plus, it would be totally not smooth of him ;)

I'm thrilled you liked it! Thank you!