Comments | ana_grrl: Firefly fic: Miles from where you are (Mal, Inara, Crew, PG-13)

ana_grrl

Firefly fic: Miles from where you are (Mal, Inara, Crew, PG-13)

Mar 27, 2007 21:43

Title: Miles from where you are
Characters: Inara, Mal, crew
Rating: PG-13
Words: About 2400
Summary: "She's late," Mal finally says.
Notes: Title from a line in the Snow Patrol song 'Set The Fire to the Third Bar'. Thank god for ozsaur for steering me along when I got lost with this. And for excellent suggestions and hand-holding.

( Everything is grey )

firefly fic, gen

Comments 45

dknightshade March 28 2007, 03:20:52 UTC

Beautifully written! Everyone's so in character. And I love Mal coming to the rescue. Thanks for the great read.

ana_grrl March 28 2007, 11:40:50 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comments! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

biggrstaffbunch March 28 2007, 05:50:10 UTC

Love. Love love love. The dreaminess, the uncertainty, the flow and yet the disjointedness...this was fabulous. I loved it.

ana_grrl March 28 2007, 11:42:45 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much!

valiant March 28 2007, 06:57:10 UTC

OH! This is so lovely. I love how Inara has the crew with her in her head and heart, obviously... I do tend to think of Inara is not one of the crew, but this makes me change my mind totally. SHE'S SO PART OF THE CREW! Anyway, this was just delicious to read. Really well done!

ana_grrl March 28 2007, 11:36:34 UTC

Hey! Thanks for reading this :D I'm really glad you liked it!

I do tend to think of Inara is not one of the crew, but this makes me change my mind totally. SHE'S SO PART OF THE CREW!

I go back and forth on that too! But I think she does as well, depending on her mood and how annoying Mal is being!

aryas_zehral March 28 2007, 16:24:03 UTC

That was lovely. Bit confusing at the beginning but I'm sure that was purposeful. But still, lovely. Love how the characters are pretty much themselves even in her hallucinations. Love how Mal waits for her to wake up. :D

ana_grrl March 28 2007, 21:19:21 UTC

Thank you! I really struggled with finishing this one, so I'm especially happy that you enjoyed it!

thenetwork March 28 2007, 20:12:28 UTC

Excellent, as always. You have that way about your fic of making me feel I just saw an episode of the show. :)

Thank you.

ana_grrl March 28 2007, 21:18:42 UTC

making me feel I just saw an episode of the show

Eeeek! That is just - fantastic! Thank you so much - I'm really glad you enjoyed it.