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an_only_tree

Not!Football AU

Apr 10, 2013 13:42

I changed my mind, I really need to break this up into smaller chapters. I also have an idea for the title, but it's kind of lame so for now...

Untitled Colombian Project
Chapter 1
Rating: R
Summary: In which Xabi is an Arsenal fan.

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dafuq did i just write?

Comments 10

ferlily1987 April 10 2013, 13:23:57 UTC

OH . MY . GOD ..... dude, seriously.

You just made my day happy and bright whit this update, I mean it, NOTHING can posibly damage my mood right now.
There are sooo many things good in this chapter I don't even know where to begin.

First of all, ARE YOU KIDDING ME?.... Daniel, Martin and FOR THE LOVE OF GOD Steven ...... wearing grenn camo pants, military boots and black shirts. DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA OF WHAT YOU'VE DONE PUTTING THAT IMAGE IN MY HEAD?....... God bless you babe.

I love how in everything that you write, there are allways memorable phrases (at least for me there are jijij ;P ) and honestly this:

"He knows he’s been blessed with a good poker face, something his brother mockingly used to refer to as his Bemused Aristocat Default Expression, and it’s the only card he seems to have now."

This made me grin like an idiot.

XABI IS THA BOSS, seriously, the guy has been kidnaped, threatened but still he manages to be perfect. I love him, he's tha fucking boss.

“I can make you feel pain in ways you can’t even imagine ( ... )

an_only_tree April 13 2013, 10:47:52 UTC

It's rewarding to know I can make someone's day better. :) What an amazing comment, thank you!

DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA OF WHAT YOU'VE DONE PUTTING THAT IMAGE IN MY HEAD?

I have a little bit of an idea... ;) Let's just say nerd!Xabi is going through the same thing you are. ;)

stevxabi April 10 2013, 13:32:39 UTC

Oh Jesus...
this is just AWESOME!!!!
Though i hope steven will not hurt xabi as he said :(
Xabi follows his eyes, curses himself when he realizes they’re set on his wildly fluttering pulse under the skin of his neck.
hahaha oh xabi despite being in such a dangerous situation you are still interested in steven's neck!!!
and martin this is the perfect job for you darling seriously lol

an_only_tree April 13 2013, 10:49:18 UTC

Though i hope steven will not hurt xabi as he said :(

He might like it though. ;)

LOL, I know, poor Skrts has SUCH a supermodel face with angelic eyes and androgynous lips and we all write him as a murderous psychopath. Someone should do a story where he's a sensitive artist or something.

anaile20gh April 10 2013, 14:52:40 UTC

( ... )

an_only_tree April 13 2013, 10:50:52 UTC

I like that I got at least that bit to be realistic. :)

Why this is so sexy????? WHY??????

Because we're all kinky bitches? :p I'm glad you're feeling better and my timing with this was quite appropriate for when you could lay in bed all day.

iamdawnkok April 11 2013, 06:33:20 UTC

I heart geek Xabi !

an_only_tree April 13 2013, 10:51:15 UTC

He's... special, let's just put it that way.

gerlonso April 17 2013, 03:49:09 UTC

Oops, I missed all of your updates! Great chapter, though. On to the next 2 :)

an_only_tree April 17 2013, 09:01:35 UTC

That's OK, I've hardly had time to write them myself. Thanks for keeping up with it!