Comments | an_ardent_rain: Heh Heh

an_ardent_rain

Heh Heh - Rayne

Nov 09, 2008 01:27

Firefly possible bit of "The Finish"
Rayne

Personally, I think Jayne would be really bad at dirty-talk. Heh heh.

( The wind from a wasp could blow them into the sea )

firefly, smut-ish, written late-08, rayne, bits

Comments 4

pladbelle_87 November 9 2008, 12:04:50 UTC

GAH!!! Just what I need for a wake-up call in the morning. XD LOVELY!!!

Dirty!Jayne is very shiny, LOL. XD

an_ardent_rain November 9 2008, 15:17:05 UTC

Hee - well I do what I can! *chuckles* Thanks for the comment!

I know, Dirty!Jayne is just too fun. He's a wily creature, though - I'm never sure if I should make him really fumbling, or surprisingly eloquent, or downright gutter-brained raunchy.

Hee. ^_^

gilove2dance November 9 2008, 15:49:10 UTC

Oh Jayne...how sexy is he? No matter what mood he is in.

Can't wait for next part! *refreshes screen* Damn not there yet *refreshes screen* Damn...

an_ardent_rain November 9 2008, 16:17:03 UTC

Hee. Yup, he is definitely all kinds of sexy. Heh.

Glad you liked! *grin* Aaand... Well, I don't have it all finished, but here's a big chunk: The Finish. I posted it unfinished because I just got so frustrated working on it (and still not getting it finished) that I just decided to put it up and keep working on it today. Enjoy - if you'd like to read it, that is. Heh heh.

Thanks for the comment! ^_^