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an_ardent_rain

An Almost Complete "ICOE" 23

Mar 14, 2008 01:14

I had a huge, long spiel about the chapter and the goings-on in my life written... But apparently (and this happens A LOT) I hit something that made the site go back to the previous page - and delete everything. >.< Blargh with a side of boiling rage. And I still can't figure out what keys I'm hitting to make that happen! It drives me up the ( Read more... )

soon to be finished, written early-08, lifestyles-verse, emotional problems, anzu, general, boring random hannah happenings, boredom, mokuba, conversation, azureshipping, insane determination, ranting, yugioh, humor, full chapter, college, romance, incomplete, sakura arc, author approved, icoe

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the_sweet March 14 2008, 20:30:05 UTC

Looks fun, especially Anzu "blackmailing" Seto like that. It's fun to see how Anzu might take on some of Seto's... more "interesting" traits, were they to get together.

The only thing I feel I should point out is that 'Megumi' is a girl's name, and until I saw him referred to as a 'him' in the scene with Mokuba, I honestly thought it was a girl. I'd pick another name that's decidedly male... ^^;

an_ardent_rain March 15 2008, 04:20:45 UTC

Yes, I definitely head fun writing it.

And... heh heh heh. >.< Yeah, I chose a girl's name intentionally. I... don't remember why now, but at the time there was an actual reason. But thanks for pointing that out - I don't want anyone to get confused!