Well thank God I'm here!

[an_ardent_rain]

Bleach    well-used idea I've been playing with
Ishida/Orihime

"But no..."

He was getting annoyed.

"Always her..."

Irritated.

"If only he would see..."

His patience was wearing out.

"He'll never feel the same..."

Until finally he exploded.  "Is that all you can think about?" he boomed.

Orihime shrank marginally back.  "I-Ishida-kun?"

He straightened his

Comments

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Hmm I'm not too sure of my feelings on this pairing. I mean sure it could work, it may explain some things in the story, I don't know really because well they don't interact too much, and most of what you see of Orihime is her loving Ichigo, and Ishida, well he's Ishida. Usually off doing quincy things, and there was the whole Ishida/bount lady thing that I wish they hadn't included. *mumbles* stupid fliller.

Regardless of the likely hood of the couple. This was well written, and I would have read it earlier, but it seems like you had it privated. I think you have them in character, you usually do. Hey if you write more I'll gladly read it. I know I've said this before, but it's been a while. You really should post your drabbles and one shots on fanfiction.net, they're really good and for once you might be able to get more feedback than just me.

[an_ardent_rain]

Oh dear.

It seems as though I've taken your advice. Heh heh heh. Yes, now I have a "collection bin" on ffDOTnet for all my Bleach-ish goodies. Nyah.

And I'm going to try to finish this sucker up soon.

[vhsgooey]

I had noticed, having you on my favorite author list and what not. This is good I think it's a good way for you to get more recognition.