I Don't Need Tiny Cue Cards (& EMPEROR'S BITS)

Feb 06, 2009 18:11

Firefly TENC! 4!
Simon, Mal + Rayne

-Here's one bit I posted here earlier that will probably make its way - in some form - into the chapter: Mal Gets Onboard

4 Bits: Fasion Show )

firefly, written late-08, emperor's, outline, story notes

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gilove2dance February 7 2009, 01:13:18 UTC
YAY! SQUEE! More TENC!!!! This made me really really happy. I think three would be fine...very amusing to be sure!

Now more! HAhaha

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an_ardent_rain February 7 2009, 01:46:41 UTC
Hee. I'm glad you're so happy about it! Yay. ^_^ The reason I picked three was to highlight three parts of Jayne that River really liked by giving the men characteristics River didn't like: one guy's shy, one guy is smart and resents her being smarter, and the last guy is really scrawny. Hee.

But yes! *cracks knuckles and puts fingers to keys* More is a-comin'.

Thanks for commenting! :)

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gilove2dance February 7 2009, 02:06:07 UTC
Ooooooo! That sounds fascinating! Okay now you have to do all three!

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an_ardent_rain February 7 2009, 02:11:53 UTC
*laughs* Well all right then! Tee hee.

I think it's a pretty good idea, so I'm glad that it works. Heh. Can't wait to finish! ^^

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willow_reece February 7 2009, 02:15:41 UTC
OoOoOo YAY! TENC! Hee. I think three is a good number, and I like the highlighting the characteristics in them that she finds unlikeable. Although I do really hope at some point River cusses out Simon over this; there a way worse guys than Jayne, they don't give him nearly enough credit. ♥

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an_ardent_rain February 7 2009, 03:38:32 UTC
Hee. I can't tell you how awesome it is to see people excited about this story. *beam*

Glad you like the three guys idea: that's where the "fashion show" comes in; they're sort of being walked out for River to look at. Well, I guess it's sort of a weak analogy, but meh. Heh.

I have no idea if River's going to go off on Simon or not. Right now I have some plans for Simon and Jayne, but I'm not quite sure where River fits in. Hee.

Well, thanks for commenting! :)

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