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Feb 05, 2009 08:26

Firefly story note bits on angsty rayne
Rayne

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firefly, rayne, written early-09, story notes

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gilove2dance February 5 2009, 17:03:44 UTC
I love the bathtub idea...very dramatic. The whole laughing/crying and grabbing totally pulled my heart up into my throat! Very angsty pictures.

I'm like you; only happy endings in my stories...^__^

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an_ardent_rain February 5 2009, 20:14:17 UTC
Yeah, I like the bathtub thing, too. That's sort of what I was... Well, I think it's where the story's going.

And yeah. Heh. I'm a little too much about the happy, I think. Heh. I don't want to hurt them! *laughs*

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an_ardent_rain February 5 2009, 20:18:24 UTC
I think the Ophelia idea is the one that I'll end up expanding. A lake would be a pretty awesome setting, but one of the reasons I thought bathtub was... well, I wanted to convey a "trapped" feeling, too. It's... it's really still foggy in my head right now, but it was a sort of theme I'd thought about. We'll see, though. Heh - knowing the way my writing goes, I may not work it in at all.

Hmm... I have a few ideas about how I want it to go. Since I know you said you wanted reluctant!Jayne, I think I'm going to have to twist the screws on him a little.

I... *lightbulb*

Wow. I have the story, I think. *laughs* Now I just have to write it! Sweet.

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