I DID IT!

[an_ardent_rain]

Firefly REVISED "ST" chp. 5 beginning
Mal, Simon, Jayne, RiverSwank. I revised. I am SO PROUD. *pats self on the back* Well... It's not in-depth, but I did make notes. I found a system that works! Print out the pages and write on them. Sweet. Here they are! I had to take freakin' pictures because the printer+scanner is FULL OF FAIL and

Comments

[gilove2dance]

Wow...that is way to hard for me to try to read cause it shows up ginormous so I'll wait til you post it typed!

When I beta read, I always print it and write on it. It's so much easier!!!

Love the little crocodile doodle thing on page one though! ;P

[an_ardent_rain]

Heh - yeah, I was so gorram pissed when that *insert a number of expletives here* scanner decided to thwart me. Yeah, I'm almost done now - just gotta finish the final scene! (Already 2200 words! ^^)

I totally think I'll start doing that! Printing it is really helpful and I like being able to physically write on the story/chapter/whatever.

*laughs* Why thank you! I'm a compulsive doodler. I also drew a chibi-Jayne, but I ended up erasing him because I couldn't get a River to go with him. Hee.

[turtle_goose]

I'm definitely intrigued and definitely excited for another chapter!

[an_ardent_rain]

Yay! :) This story is ridiculously fun to write, so I just seem to keep churning it out!

Re: No subject

[an_ardent_rain]

Um, cool? Heh. I'm not sure why you saved it - just boring revisions! Hee.

And since at the bottom of the site it says that neither the federal government nor Obama endorses it, I think I'll stay away. Thanks though.

And thanks! I shall certainly keep writing! ^_^ It is my passion. Hee.