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an_ardent_rain

Beta Version of "Evolution" Chapter Two

Jan 09, 2009 04:06

Firefly "Evolution" Chapter 2
River, Jayne, Mal/Inara

Note: The story (chapter one) is set a month post-BDM. This chapter is set several months after that. Well... maybe not several. Four maybe? No, I guess that is sort of several. At any rate it's after the movie and doesn't immediately follow the first chapter. The entire story will be ( Read more... )

fic:evolution, lovely, firefly, complete, challenge, full chapter, new, general, author approved, written early-09

Comments 2

gilove2dance January 9 2009, 14:51:59 UTC

I am lovin' this story so gorram much! It is so new and different! I like how it's not Rayne right away but you are building their relationship slowly and with ease. Very excited for more!

an_ardent_rain January 9 2009, 15:01:06 UTC

Hee. Thank you! ^_^

I'm really happy with it so far. Yup, I really wanted to do a slow-build story with them, but I had too many unfinished fics to start a new big one. With this format - the sort one chapter, one scene thing - I can really practice that without having to turn it into a whole, long story. Ooh, I'm really excited about chapter 3. I think it's gonna be awesome! *laughs*