Fic: Last Night, I Was Inside Of You (M/Q/R, NC-17)

Sep 14, 2010 23:45

Title: Last Night, I Was Inside of You
Author: an_an0maly 
Summary: Late one night on a bus ride to Cleveland.
Pairing: Mercedes/Quinn/Rachel
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5000
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters or anything from Glee aside from merchandise.
Author’s Note: Based on some kinks and prompts from someone. Kinks included: a little voyeurism and public ( Read more... )

mercedes/quinn/rachel, glee, fic, fic: nc-17

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an_an0maly September 15 2010, 06:41:07 UTC
First off, thank you so much for leaving feedback! Honestly, I didn't expect many people to read it, let alone leave any feedback. LOL.

I love that song as well. I put my iPod on shuffle and it played at one point and it kind of stuck. I'm glad it was a blast from the past for you! :D And yes, it's very very sexy. ;)

I'm really glad this wasn't cringe-worthy! :D I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you again for the positive feedback! :D I really appreciate it.

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glori_ficus September 14 2010, 17:49:12 UTC
You have no idea how much I love you right now.

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an_an0maly September 15 2010, 06:43:00 UTC
&hearts

I love you, too! Thank you for reading and leaving feedback!

I was so worried about this, you have no idea, so leaving me any notification that you read (and enjoyed) this, is just amazing to me! Thank you so, so much. :D

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_wornmedown September 14 2010, 17:56:00 UTC
UNF. That was... UNF.

I need a sequel at the motel, NOW.

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an_an0maly September 15 2010, 06:47:55 UTC
:D :D :D

I like your use of 'UNF'. :D I'm so happy you enjoyed this!

Thank you for leaving me feedback. I don't know if there will be a sequel, so I wont promise anything. I wasn't even supposed to be writing this! LOL. But again, thanks you so much reading and leaving me feedback! &hearts

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motylik September 14 2010, 18:15:04 UTC
Dude, so I only read this cause it's you because I'm not really a fan of Mercedes. I love Amber, but Mercedes just rubs me the wrong way. But this was really really hot. Poor Rachel though, no one wanted to room with her. I was very happy that Mercedes and Quinn did at the end. :D Hot. You're a good smut writer! :)

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an_an0maly September 15 2010, 06:53:21 UTC
DUDE! ;)

I knew you'd pick up that bit about Rachel near the end. LOL. You're so funny.

Thank you for reading it! Did it help that 2/3 of the threesome was Quinn/Rachel? I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I was worried about posting it. I didn't think there would be many people reading it, but not only did FIVE people read it, they also left feedback! So I'm the happiest I could be right now! :D :D :D

I'm really glad you enjoyed the smut! :D I'm sorry it got so wordy, though. I think that was a drawback.

Anyway, thanks so much though! You know I really appreciate it when people leave feedback! Especially friends who didn't even know I was writing this. ;)

Thanks!

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motylik September 15 2010, 10:15:39 UTC
Heee. :D

Hahaha. Good to know I'm predictable AND funny. I live to serve and please, bb. haha

Yes, it did. I was kind of concentrating on them and sometimes even forgot Mercedes was there. Haha. I loved that Mr Shue heard them. LOL. Awwwww. I'm glad you're happy, bb!

I don't think anything being wordy will ever be a drawback to me. Have you not picked up on the fact that I'm wordy? Anyway, I didn't notice any wordyness detracting from the hotness of the smut here. :) You worry too much, my dear. :)

I'm pretty sure I knew you were writing this. I think you tweeted about it at some point. I wasn't surprised when I saw it at least, so my subconscious must have known. :)

How about letting me read something in advance as thank you? Like a next chapter of something? Pwease? *makes puppy dog eyes*

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biruuu September 14 2010, 19:18:52 UTC
WELL, THIS WAS AWESOME. M/Q/R = INSTANT HEARTS IN MY EYES

You reminded me of how underused buses are in this fandom, btw. Who knows what happens during all those trips to invitationals and sectionals and stuff :D And I liked that you managed to sneak in a bit of characterization too, which can be hard with these kind of fics.

M/Q/R is one of those ships that's nearly impossible to find fic for, so thanks for writing this. I liked it a lot ♥

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an_an0maly September 15 2010, 07:09:08 UTC
&hearts &hearts &hearts

Thank you so much! And yeah, buses and other modes of transport (planes, cars, vans, trains... so many to choose from) are definitely underused. :)

I didn't know I snuck in much characterization, so thank you for noticing and letting me know you liked it! :D This was really my first time writing Mercedes, so hopefully what little I did with her character was close enough to what we've seen on screen. :D

If you know of any other M/Q/R fics, please let me know! It's my new, not-so-secret ship, so send anything you find, my way. Hopefully I get to revisit the ship in the future. :D

Thank you so much for taking the time to read the fic and leaving me really great feedback. I appreciate it immensely! :D

&hearts

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