Comments | amyxaphania: Fic: Out of the Grey: (5/10)

amyxaphania

Fic: Out of the Grey: (5/10)

Mar 21, 2010 20:39

Title: Out of the Grey
Pairing: Spike/Buffy
Rating: NC-17
Chapter Word Count: 1,296
Beta: ssddgr
Banner: pamsblau
Summary: In the days following the Hellmouth’s collapse, Buffy finds herself craving time alone. A series of apparently random decisions draw her to the coast of England, where she has to deal with the possibility that ( Read more... )

fic: out of the grey, spike/buffy, fandom: btvs

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amyxaphania March 22 2010, 17:21:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you think so. :)

peroxidelove March 22 2010, 01:31:57 UTC

I got more and more nervous with every line! I kept expecting Buffy to turn around to find that Spike had gone poof and suddenly vanished. This story's just so sweet :)

amyxaphania March 22 2010, 17:22:23 UTC

Aww, thank you! I won't say anything about what's coming up, but just keep reading. ;)

sarian71 March 22 2010, 18:27:27 UTC

“Well, I still love you anyway,” Buffy replied, freezing when she realised what she had said, and the casual way she'd said it. She glanced at Spike, who had stilled at her words.

Neither of them spoke for several long moments, until... “Buffy?” He said her name with such hope in his voice that Buffy knew she couldn’t play the avoiding game any longer. “You mean that?” He let out a huff of breath that almost sounded like a laugh.

Aww... I loved this moment! I'm glad they had this talk and Spike now knows that Buffy meant what she said.

Neither of them spoke, or moved, for several long minutes. Spike had slipped his arms around her waist, his chin resting on her shoulder. Buffy tilted her head back, leaning against his chest. The sun had just started to set and the tranquillity of the moment was palpable.That is so romantic and beautiful! *happy sigh ( ... )

amyxaphania March 23 2010, 11:35:31 UTC

Thank you for the great review! The last part you quoted was inspired by the pose on the banner. I'm glad you're enjoying this fic!

alwaysjbj March 23 2010, 05:57:32 UTC

I love the playfulness in this chapter, it is nice to see them so happy and so easy in each other's company. I'm glad they got the 'I love you's out there.

amyxaphania March 23 2010, 11:35:46 UTC

Thank you! :)

dawnofme April 20 2010, 20:02:41 UTC

Hot shower, wet Buffy…”
She knows how to get him moving. :) Lovely chapter.

amyxaphania April 21 2010, 15:39:33 UTC

Hee, yes. Thanks for the comment! :)