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amythorthree

White Collar: If I Were A Bell

Sep 23, 2011 16:24

Title: If I Were A Bell
Wordcount: 895
Rating: PH
Pairing(s): Peter/Neal?El
Prompt(s): Schmoopy h/c fic. Neal gets hurt or sick, and Peter and El take care of him. Can be established relationship or a first time fic, or gen with OT3 undertones! (Which, let's face it, is basically the show itself.)
Notes: Written for the Fall Fandom Free-For-All
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canon: white collar, who: peter burke, who: elizabeth burke, who: neal caffrey

Comments 7

radiophile September 23 2011, 20:42:30 UTC

Neal makes a protesting noise and settles in further, his eyes properly closing now. He said all that he has to say on the matter.
Awwww, Neal you big baby XD ♥

This was so sweet and adorable! :'D I love that Neal can recite all of Guys and Dolls, that's so perfect ;) The image of Neal leaning into Peter, and Peter kissing his forehead, was especially heartwarming :3 And I love that you turned this into a getting-together fic at the end! ♥

Thank you so much! ♥♥♥

amythorthree September 23 2011, 20:53:46 UTC

:D:D:D Yaaaay! Approval is good, I am glad to ahve it! This was so much fun to write and made me feel all warm inside, so I was happy to do it. Thank you for giving me such a lovely prompt. <3

lmx_v3point3 September 23 2011, 21:11:26 UTC

This is very sweet, but you need a beta reader, darling, or at least to look over your work when you're done. Your numbers are showing. :)

merlottetrollop September 24 2011, 00:07:01 UTC

I agree about the beta reader, but the concept is lovely and I adore your dialogue. Nice job!!

Sweet charming ursula4x September 25 2011, 14:59:42 UTC

This was heart warming.

archerstar September 26 2011, 04:30:23 UTC

This was sweet, but the lack of editing really ruined this for me. I think if you'd at least have read it aloud to yourself once, you would have caught so many of these mistake.