Clear Blue Sky (40/55)

Dec 10, 2008 06:49


CHAPTER FORTY

A/N: No illustration requests, then? Never mind. I finally made myself an icon for the series. I have no graphics programs and was basically making this up as I went along!

“Right,” Jack said steadily, looking around him and trying to pull himself together. “We need to go back to Liella’s and tell them what’s happening. And then we ( Read more... )

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cardiff_3 December 10 2008, 07:32:56 UTC
Gah! I am gripping my seat waiting for more.

As for the art. I would not mind seeing what the University looks like. I keep picturing the Time Lord Citadel. With the Dome around it when I think of the Unni with a shield.

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amyross_fic December 10 2008, 07:46:37 UTC
Ah, but the shield is invisible. You can only see it because of the dust and crap gathered at its edges.

But thank you for requesting something! I have a very clear picture in my mind of what it looks like, so I could definitely give that a try.

Thanks!

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hab318princess December 10 2008, 07:51:49 UTC
Great update!

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amyross_fic December 10 2008, 17:37:01 UTC
Thanks :D

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etmuse December 10 2008, 13:00:37 UTC
You know, I think I sort of love that the Doctor is actually almost superfluous to requirements here... Nyssa, Jack and Ianto are the ones actually doing most of the work (and Nyssa even came up with the idea without him)

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amyross_fic December 10 2008, 17:39:49 UTC
Heh. Yeah, the Doctor seems to alternate between cheerleader and harbinger of doom!

I dunno, maybe it's because the problem is quite ordinary. But I quite like it, too. Everyone should have their chance to shine :)

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adafrog December 10 2008, 14:14:50 UTC
Oooh, suspense!

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amyross_fic December 10 2008, 17:40:11 UTC
Mmmmm! There could be more chapters like this before the end!

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thrace_adams December 10 2008, 14:57:53 UTC
Well at least they are all back together and in one piece for now. Very actiony. Well done.

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amyross_fic December 10 2008, 17:41:19 UTC
Thanks! I actually find any sort of action sequence hard to write (I'm more of an overwrought dialogue and heavy narrative person, sadly!) so I'm glad that's working.

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