Lightning Strikes, part 4

[amycat8733]

Title: Lightning Strikes
Author: Amycat8733
Rating: T
Pairing(s): John/Teyla
Characters: John, Teyla, Rodney, Ronon, Keller, Lorne, Woolsey
Warning(s): sentient Atlantis
Length:
Disclaimer: The characters and locales of SGA don't belong to me. For fun, not profit. I just swim in the pool. No borrowed OCs were harmed during this production.
Summary: A

Comments

[nacinom]

Good chapter. I am glad that John got sprung from the Infirmary but maybe he might have been safer there. Ronon and Teyla are wonderfully supportive. Woolsey's two day deal seems reasonable from his point of view. But of course they are going to regret it. Something bad is going to happen, both John and I can feel it. You wrote here that they just got Rodney back from the Wraith. That might explain his overly obsessive behavior. What happened to him with the Wraith? Is the timeline for your story based on The SGA Legacy books? Fun.

[amycat8733]

He would have been. More whump on the way!Yes, I had Legacy in mind when I started this one. It's kind of post Legacy in that we have no idea what's coming next which is why I left it a bit vague.
That was actually a last minute addition. I felt it made a good reason. Another way to look at Rodney's behavior is as an addict.

More please

[nesabj]

Are you planning on posting more of this? I hate getting hooked on WIPs that don't get finished.

Re: More please

[amycat8733]

For your viewing pleasure, we present ... part five, coming soon to LJ!

[2bluaeryn]

I've not been on LJ recently but was glad to see this up. But I've got to ask did I miss Chpt 3? Is it possible for you to post all the links in one post?

Thanks for the great read.

[amycat8733]

Here are the links to the current chapters. I am working on posting the links in my sidebar and am going to go back and link the pages together. Enjoy!

Lightning Strikes:
part 1 - http://amycat8733.livejournal.com/1190.html
part 2 - http://sheppard-hc.livejournal.com/454254.html
part 3 - http://sheppard-hc.livejournal.com/454778.html
part 4 - http://amycat8733.livejournal.com/1985.html
part 5 - http://amycat8733.livejournal.com/3297.html
part 6 - http://amycat8733.livejournal.com/3404.html

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[amycat8733]

If Microsoft translated your comment correctly, you do not like my story and think it is shameful. I am sorry you feel that way, but you are in the minority. If you only read to part 4, you should read further as the story changes, but that is up to you.