And It Was A Dream, And It Was A Fantasy 4/?

Aug 17, 2013 23:47


Title:  Verbolten- part 1
Author: Amy_0127
Rating: NC-17
Pairing:  Gibbs/DiNozzo
Summary:  Part 1 - A birthday surprise for Tony.
Spoilers:  None
Disclaimer: Don't own a thing related to NCIS - aside from the DVDs which I paid copious amounts of money for
Warning:  Slash - m/m lovin' -  Please don't read if you are underage or are opposed graphic ( Read more... )

fanfiction, ncis, gibbs/dinozzo

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ncisvu_lj August 18 2013, 12:20:27 UTC
This was incredibly sexy. Tony's so responsive to Gibbs and appreciative of every little thing and him headslapping Gibbs... that was just priceless!!

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amy_0127 August 18 2013, 16:22:42 UTC
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. Planning on a part 2 at the park sometime in the future. Stay tuned! :)

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gibbstonysbabe August 18 2013, 22:29:19 UTC
Nice!! Tony is a bright one! Very sexy and seductive as Gibbs takes Tony on their journey. A nice look into their lives and the way the meld togther.

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amy_0127 August 19 2013, 23:19:26 UTC
Thanks! They do fit together pretty darned well, I'd say.

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cackymn_lj August 24 2013, 19:29:20 UTC
Crazy, CRAZY HOT! You started out great but are getting better by leaps and bounds. This has so many nice touches I don't even know where to start, seriously. Congratulations. I especially liked it BC I am woking on something right now that features fingers. (I really think these two would suck on each others' fingers.) I liked the amusement park theme bc it DID turn into a ride. I loved Tony's realization. I loved that he tells Abby everything and that that's cool. I LOVED the pace. Mostly I loved these two lines: he didn't think it was possible to love the man more than he did right now.
: Simple, yet complicated. Fortunately, this was Gibbs' specialty, for he was
the same.
You have such a nice take on their psychology and on their love. Thank you.

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amy_0127 August 24 2013, 20:16:28 UTC
Wow - thank you so much! I'm really glad you see improvement in the writing - that is a huge encouragement! I cannot wait to read what you have going!

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