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amused4ever

BrigitsFlame, September - Week 2

Sep 13, 2009 15:39

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greenwillow27 September 14 2009, 18:52:21 UTC

Oh sad... in a poignant way. Poor Edward clinging to something that maybe once existed for him...?

One thing:Edward’s face was read when he bent over...
I think it should be "face was red"?

amused4ever September 16 2009, 05:41:40 UTC

YES and yes! Haha, sorry about that. =3=

katden September 14 2009, 23:55:10 UTC

::applause::
Wonderful! I want to know the answers to the questions Leigha asked! Please tell!
:D

amused4ever September 16 2009, 05:45:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! As for the questions, this Max was always a mech. ;3

...If you didn't understand that, just tell me--I'll stop failing miserably at being cryptic and let you know what's going on. >_>;

osoreranai September 15 2009, 01:57:44 UTC

Nicely done. Has kind of a Philip K. Dick feel about it.

amused4ever September 16 2009, 05:53:37 UTC

Haha, his writing or the whole android replacement of him? ;P

rangerdewshine September 15 2009, 04:09:37 UTC

tragic! And so very many unanswered questions ...

amused4ever September 16 2009, 05:55:30 UTC

Ha, I've been getting that a lot--is it a good thing or bad thing?

Thanks for reading! :)

ephemeralbreath September 16 2009, 03:16:24 UTC

Maggie!

Victor and I read this. Yeah...

amused4ever September 16 2009, 05:46:18 UTC

KELLY!

Yay? ...YAY! :D