Fanfic: Community - Touch Football

Apr 15, 2011 18:04

Title: Touch Football
Author: amtrak12
Fandom: Community
Spoilers/Warnings: None
Characters/Pairings: Study Group, established Jeff/Annie
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1283
Author's Note: No idea. Rediscovered this tonight when I was brainstorming another fic. Just a random idea that popped into my head when 2.21 promo pics were first released. Absolutely zero ( Read more... )

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robothor1111 April 16 2011, 00:43:33 UTC
Okay so I totally watched that Friends episode like two hours ago, not even kidding. Okay, maybe more like three, but I just watched that ep and I had that song in my head earlier today and yes I read your fic but I'll probably have to read it again because my mind was going all "WHOA PSYCHIC LINK IS SO HAPPENING RIGHT NOW" the entire time I was reading it.

And each time you said Shirly "ran" I picture her and Jeff dashing off in the gossip ep. :D

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amtrak12 April 16 2011, 00:52:31 UTC
LOL So that's why I was actually able to concentrate and clean this fic up tonight? AWESOME :D I approve of this greatly.

And each time you said Shirly "ran" I picture her and Jeff dashing off in the gossip ep.

Hahaha!! Nice! :D

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fangirl_101 April 16 2011, 00:44:11 UTC
sooooooo cute!!! I was smiling the whole time. The girls would totally kick the guys' asses at touch football!

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amtrak12 April 16 2011, 00:53:40 UTC
Thanks! :D And yeah they would LOL They're more clever than the guys ;)

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shopgirl909 April 16 2011, 02:49:33 UTC
You had me smiling from the first word.

Ah, what a great story.

I would love to read more stories in this universe you created...just saying. :)

Again, fantastic job. Could see it all happening because you wrote their voices perfectly.

Oh, and every time you said "Shirley ran" I just kept thinking of her and her "comically huge bag" running down the field. lol.

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amtrak12 April 16 2011, 03:59:18 UTC
Aww thank you! Glad you enjoyed! I'm trying to get some more fics out this weekend. I'm tired of them all sitting unfinished on my computer :/ Seriously some of these have been here for MONTHS :S It's driving me nuts.

Could see it all happening because you wrote their voices perfectly.

Aww thank you!!! Seriously like the best compliment a fic writer can get right there :D

Oh, and every time you said "Shirley ran" I just kept thinking of her and her "comically huge bag" running down the field. lol.

LOL That is a hilarious sight. But of course her bag could prove to be very useful as a weapon or a shield in a football match ;)

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eva_aftagrl April 16 2011, 05:54:50 UTC
Glad you finished this bc it's great, beyond great. I totally get the whole fic thing you're going through. Right now I'm in the same pickle, but it seems like I'm just putting random crap together and posting it to clear my brain.

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amtrak12 April 16 2011, 21:58:25 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! :)

but it seems like I'm just putting random crap together and posting it to clear my brain.

Ugh that's totally what it feels like I'm doing with my longer fic I've been trying to write :/ I have a bunch of scenes or half scenes that don't connect together yet and they're all just sitting on my computer. >_< Hopefully we can both push through this!

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amtrak12 April 16 2011, 22:02:52 UTC
I had to watch that episode right after the idea popped into my head because I wasn't sure if I ever saw it all the way through lol Such an amusing episode :) Glad you think I captured the vibe! Thanks so much for the comment!

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