a Day in our Life { Prolouge & Chapter 1 }

[amtopm_xx]

Title: a Day in our Life
Pairing: AibaxOC/ShoxOC (+ implications of Ohmiya, Juntoshi, and all those pairings we love)
Rating: PG-13
Type: Fanfiction
Summary: It all began with the 1999 Talent Recruitment Expo in Japan. Trainees met, befriended, and a certain young girl was given an opportunity to change the face of Johnny’s and the J-Pop genre

Comments

[novemberzeal]

This is interesting! One small thing, though. I noticed that at first you called the girls' agency Sparkle Spectrum, but then you switched to Sapphire Stone, which I thought was probably an accident.
I look forward to seeing what comes next :)

[amtopm_xx]

*headdesk* I made a note to myself to go back and change that. Ugh. The company is Sapphire Stone named after the Gemstone's leader Rebecca 'Sapphire' Martin. I would just go back and fix the names, but whenever I touch this post, everything gets all screwed up, so I'm just gonna leave it and maybe add an edit on the bottom or something. >_<

Thanks for pointing that out ot me though and thanks for the comment. You have no idea how good that makes me feel. I've been nervous out of my fxcking mind about this. lol.

[amethystdream3]

this is rather interesting, I wish you posted a bit more, I look forward to more updates

[luthien_mpl]

This sounds indeed interesting up to now, and your writing style is quite good, so I think I'll keep reading and see how you get a haafu girl into a japanese all boys agency. ^.~
There's only one thing that I noticed that bothered me a bit, even though it's actually no big deal: "'…electronics are over there.' She said and motioned to the laptop and mp3 player sitting on the floor near her dresser" .... I looked it up just to make sure. There were indeed laptops available in '99 and the first mp3 player came out in '98... I just think the possibility of her owning a portable cassette or cd player back then is a lot higher, even if she's from New York's higher class. But that doesn't really have anything to do with the story, so just ignore it. XD""

[amtopm_xx]

lol. I actually did think about that when I wrote it. I'm like, 'Uhh..wait, would she really have one...?' lol, but I decided it'd be okay. Thanks for pointing it out though. I'll watch out for that sort of thing more often as I write.

BTW, I've seen your icon like 500000000000 times, but I still LOVE it to death. It's soo funny and cute. lol.

[luthien_mpl]

No problem. As I said, it's no big deal, I just kinda stumbled over it and wondered. ^^

XD Thanks. That's exactly why it's my default, because it cracked me up everytime I saw it the first few weeks and it still makes me grin even now. ^^
BTW... did I mention how much I adore the childminder batch you made? XD

[amtopm_xx]

Hehehe. You may have mentioned it once or twice...

[kanesu]

I was curious and came to see what Arashi would be like with a sixth member ^^ Very nice idea and it's going smoothly so far! I'm looking forward to what's coming..

[sasami9969]

sounds good so far. Good writing style and all that jazz. Sounds interesting too. I think there was like 1 typo but nothing too major. I enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing where it'll go and how you're gonna merge her in there.

The only thing is try and make the chapters a little longer. I feel like it just gets going and it stops. but that's just my opinion.

Keep up the good work!